How Lucky We Are

Been so lonely a long, long time
Cannot do it wrong, wrong time
So dazed and confused
That I feel slightly used

From some abuse I sustained long ago…  
This could have made me go very slow…
Not on your life, I go very fast…
I want to get there, Don’t want to be last…

I was beat like a man by the time I was 5
It is a wonder that I came out alive
My grandmother died at the hands of this man
It is a cold case file so what’s the plan

I could never do what was done to me
Wanting my children to be wild and free
Live your life freely for you will know
To open your eyes and watch the show

I lived a life that was not for the meek
Scared for my life every day of the week
Once it was known what happened to me
My mom made it so we could be free

She was scared for her life as well you know
Now none of that matters we were able to go
Holding a knife to his greasy throat
She escorted him out to the dirty road

How lucky we are to be free
I sure am happy to be me
My children have children that make me smile
Think I will go run the miracle mile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/12/2009 9:46:00 AM
There is nothing that a real Mother will not do to protect and secure her children's lives! Excellent write, John and congratulations on your poem being featured this week on PS! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations, John, on having your terrific poem featured this week. It was enjoyable to read. And the happy ending is wonderful! Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/10/2009 8:19:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2009 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Love Pam
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Date: 11/9/2009 11:49:00 AM
this the true story of my life.... thank you for liking it.... it truly comes from within....
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Date: 11/9/2009 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on this lovely sad heartfelt poem being featured this week. Love Pam
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Date: 11/9/2009 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 8/18/2009 6:51:00 AM
John, this is a sad sad write. Seems it is happening more and more. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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