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You said you will love me....always Be there for me....always Cherish me...always How long is your always, My Love? A moment An hour A day Just for this time While our bodies and souls are Intertwined? While I make love to you and make you shine... Sublime? How long is your always, my Love? A week A month A season A year While I’m still healthy and young Beautifully bountiful smooth and silky voluptuous and vivacious agelessly alluring sultry and sexy sweet your whenever you want it treat? How long is your always, my Love? A lifetime? Beyond? To Eternity? How long is your always, my Love? Tell me… Explain it to me Whisper it in my ear as my hair brushes against your chin and my lips plant a kiss on your neck Tell me.... Tell me!!!! When you say You will love me "ALWAYS" Is your always.... the same time period as mine? Search your heart Search it carefully Right now as it rapidly pulsates with passion's pleasure Right now when eternity is ours Here...now... Ask your heart Search it well and find The truth that there resides Pounding in those chambers Reverberating Righteous Rhymes TRUTH Listen... And if your heart answers.... "As long as I beat....ALWAYS breathes" Then I'll give you my all….ALL Body and soul Forever and ALWAYS YOURS... as in my beating heart.... You are forever and ALWAYS MINE! :) Jade Celeste

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Date: 8/24/2015 9:07:00 AM
There are some great comments Eileen. I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 4/22/2015 3:10:00 AM
I love your personality in this piece, Jade : ) To give your all...only someone truly special deserves that! I have been reading a lot of your poetry as of late. I hope things are going well for you. Sending you a lot of love and hoping you have a wonderful rest of the week... Always, Laura
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:54:00 PM
Eileen you write with such beauty and still endow the work with such passion through your words. Your question is a unique twist on the classic poetic theme "love unrequited?" this is worthy of much more than a 7. I have put it into my favourites. love Shane xxx
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:24:00 PM
Wow, wow, wow....such a question. My friend, I Always love your poems, they Always make me feel something and Always make me want to read more.....
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David Brown
Date: 4/7/2015 2:45:00 PM
It is truly my pleasure...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/7/2015 8:50:00 AM
WOW! David...this is the first time you come looking for me, and not in response to my visit. I'm happy! :) Did it on purpose, you know! :) Thanks
Date: 4/6/2015 1:48:00 PM
Awesome piece Jade ;) you had me engrossed in this gem.. really enjoyed reading it tonight ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/7/2015 8:51:00 AM
:) Hi Wilma!! A lovely first time visit... Thanks! :)
Date: 4/5/2015 3:06:00 PM
You make words do exactly what you want them to do,, the intertwined bodies as well as souls, this compelling nature of love and desire! A pleasure to read you, Eileen! and thank you so much for stopping by to read mine.. Happy Easter
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/6/2015 1:08:00 AM
My pleasure to read your work, Gautami. :) Thank you for your visits to my work. Much appreciated. Wishing you a blessed Easter as well. I'm on spring break....I'm happy. Hugs
Date: 4/5/2015 10:09:00 AM
I have enjoyed my ride on the ooh la la Express! Happy Easter Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/5/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thanks, Richard...I'm glad. You are so good to me. You read all my writes....I'm glad that you actually find something praiseworthy in them. Thanks every so much. Hugs
Date: 4/5/2015 6:43:00 AM
I trust his 'always' is forever Eileen - but one can never tell i guess.... beautiful beautiful words my friend:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/6/2015 1:09:00 AM
:) Always is a relative term, my dear. That's what this poem is all about. Thanks for the visit. Hugs!!