Valsa George Poet Rhyme

How Does the Soul Enter Heaven

Though earthly life, as we all know, is full of strife,
Like most of men, I am in love with my life.
I know, on earth we are only interim passengers,
And cannot be here for ever as we are God’s cavaliers.

Despite my soul’s longing to step on the Heavenly shore,
To enjoy all the grace and bliss kept in store,
I don’t wish to shed my earthly existence,
And death, I try to prevent with all my persistence.

Alas! Days wither as petals from a flower.
Time draws near, when before death, I must cower.
My days here are growing shorter than I think 
And I am briskly moving to my life’s brink,

When death’s noose strangles me tighter
Oh God, before you, I have only one prayer.
Don’t turn your back on me, when with Satan I fight.
And don’t allow me to be subdued by his might.

I deem my soul to be of priceless worth,
To be harbored in Heaven after my life on earth.
Oh Lord, from all diabolic forces, as I try to wrest,
Help me pass the final test to bide in your heavenly nest.

When I shed my earthly load and bid goodbye,
I shall be as light as a feather and soar high.
Thus, from my body, when my soul shall depart,
Pick me up and hold me in your hands never to part.

I dream of being wafted up by the heavenly throng,
To dwell in glory and lulled to rest by the angel’s song.
I shall then look upon my Savior’s shining face,
And shall thank Him for His benign saving grace!

Feb. 3.2023

How Does the Soul Enter Heaven Poetry Contest
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Bill Baker February 8, 2023 at 4:10 PM Precious poem. Your thankfulness is humbling. Your rhyming was eloquent and the poem was smooth to read. Bless you and please stay as long as you can, my dear friend. I added this one to my FAV list to be read as a reminder often. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Mike Gentile February 3, 2023 at 1:57 PM Light as a feather Valso, perfect description ! You have crafted a very meaningful and heartfelt poem and a great entry for the contest! Happy Friday!!!

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther February 3, 2023 at 1:21 PM Hello Val just read your poem HOW DOES THE SOUL ENTER HEAVEN i think was a fantastic write to read. My days here are growing shorter than I think And I'm briskly moving to my Life's brink were the parts I like Best. A satisfying read. Be at Peace ENJOY Valsa

Victor Buhagiar February 3, 2023 at 9:12 AM Well done, dear Valsa. A commentary on life and death. I often think my time is near but that is not what I want. Life is precious. Best for a win. May you have a long and healthy life.

Joseph P. DiMino February 3, 2023 at 8:46 AM Beautiful, priceless expression of love and faith. The heart pouring out the soul of love within, what makes us part of God, inseparable throughout eternity. We can only distance ourselves from God consciously...but never actually. "I shall then look upon my Savior’s shining face, And shall thank Him for His benign saving grace!" Wonderful write!

Vijay Pandit February 3, 2023 at 6:21 AM I deem my soul to be of priceless worth, To be harbored in Heaven after my life on earth---Well said, Valsa. Seeking eternal peace every life spends a lifetime. Best to you.

Sotto Poet February 3, 2023 at 5:50 AM Valsa, you have painted such beautiful pictures with your poems and the settings that you have described. You have, as usual, done a wonderful job expressing your individual perspective on paradise after death and the hope that you have for it. Good luck with the contest

Sara Kendrick February 3, 2023 at 4:09 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by. Sara