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How Deep Is Your Love - Make Sure You

Make sure you... Live your life to the full To love each day and the night time to Like you would maybe love a jewel Our life on this earth does not last It burns up so very fast From that very first breath we took Until we take our very last Family for me must always come first Both yours and mine and planet earths Nature, nurture, safeguard the future As life they say is short and sweet So make sure that you complete Living your life to the very end And make sure to include your friends As well as those you have never met So where do we all go from here Well we will find out I fear The reason that we were put here Some say religion I say no As for me I hope I know That we are not all alone As Genesis tells us so That God created us all in his image? But who is God and whats his mischief As the planet is dying So are we alone the culprits? If we are then I believe That you and me and humanity With mother nature and the human spirit May just find a way to fix it How deep is your Love? DAMO x

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Date: 11/16/2019 1:59:00 PM
HelloDamian Keady, I like the lat verse of this poem. Yes i believe that the human spirit and mother nature will fix it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/18/2019 5:09:00 PM
Hello Damian Keady,yes it is fixable. have a nice evening my friend.
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Damian Keady
Date: 11/16/2019 3:37:00 PM
Hi Darlene, so good to hear from you.. ! I hope you are well my PS friend.. We can fix it I am sure. But only if we all commit to it and start now and stop procrastinating... best wishes and a friendly hug. Thanks for posting Damo
Date: 11/8/2019 9:15:00 PM
God will destroy those destroying the earth. Have read in Rev. Every good gift comes from God, not mischief, if I may defend God. Good poem.
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Damian Keady
Date: 11/9/2019 5:31:00 PM
Thankyou Barbara for reading and for taking the time to post your comment.... Whatever our personal beliefs, that's the beauty of free speech to be able to express them. I am happy you liked my poem. Kind regards DAMO
Date: 10/21/2019 7:09:00 AM
Wise words DAMO! Very well written :-) x
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Damian Keady
Date: 11/3/2019 2:20:00 PM
Ahh thanks so much Elaine.. Best wishes as always my PS friend DAMO X
Date: 10/18/2019 8:08:00 PM
I vote this for a POTD. I am a madwoman for honesty, whether I agree or disaree! What a great write, DAMO! I love your poem because your heart is so in this. It's like I am being with you. Not words to impress me with some off the wall brilliance. I don't like those at all. Thank you so very much for being real! What a gift you are to this site A hug from me and big cheers. A FAVE Panagiota x
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Damian Keady
Date: 10/19/2019 6:17:00 PM
Thank you so much! DAMO x

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