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How Dare You

How dare you judge me with you it was anything but a guarantee Only choosing the parts you like disregarding the rest not satisfying your delight Punishing me for my past a deep pain you will never grasp Absent when the darkness you brought left me in a paralyzing twilight poisoned by your snake bite You are not the judge of my life experiences you haven't the right to have any grievances For I found beauty in your imperfections mine were a reason for rejection...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/25/2017 5:51:00 AM
Dear Sofia. Good Morning. You are you hear you roar. Thank goodness you broke way from a toxic situation and life. Know you deserve better. Your words have strength and courage. May you always see and know that. You have expressed yourself with dignity and grace in this entry. Let yesterday be yesterday. Well done entirely. Thank goodness for poetry.
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Date: 3/21/2017 2:09:00 PM
Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. Your simplest words can carry the most weight when you make the reader feel them as well as hear them; and you do this well. Emile.
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Date: 3/21/2017 2:15:00 PM
thank you so very much Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs