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Hovering Flight

hummingbirds are God's gift to us . . . with their unique "flight" - their agile hovering and darting some with brilliant iridescent plumage and jeweled adornments and others duller in colors of browns or greens . . . a tiny swift~ precious and delightful bird ~ I have created a garden to attract their flower affinity as the hummingbirds have a need for sweet nectar and they have a niche no other bird can occupy in my heart ~ I love their wild beating wings and their squeaky high-pitched chirps and whistles I never tire of watching those long bills dipping deep into a flower and those forked tongues lapping the sweetness . . . ~ my garden is full of wildflowers that hummers' like- lots of trumpet blooms brightly colored and places for pendent cupped nests protected from sun and rain ~ yes, hummingbirds need a place for nocturnal resting too then, starting in the early morn' they come darting to dazzle me with their unique fearless dashing "flight" ~ and giving them my love I have given them a fountain bath as there is nothing more divine than to watch them splashing and ruffling their feathers . . . in the falling water oh, I do love hummers' taking a hovering 'bath' . . . ~ there is a peace in their dashing among my flowers the lupines, foxglove, nasturtiums, lilies and others they also like my hanging baskets of petunia and verbena . . . so, they grace my porch too ~ __________________________ June 09, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/hovering flight Copyright Protected, ID 06-1463-614-09 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Flight 2 sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 06/24/2022 Third Place

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Date: 6/25/2022 1:11:00 AM
All birds, flowers, nature as a whole is given life. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2022 6:26:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, I just love the video of the hummingbird fountain, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/24/2022 8:48:00 PM
Back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations, Constance...
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Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2022 6:26:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/24/2022 5:46:00 PM
Dear Constance, I adore hummingbirds and I adore your poem too. Your lively, dazzling imagery captures their sprightly spirit perfectly. Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle's contest with this exquisite poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2022 6:28:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my writing, I adore hummingbirds also, and thanks for the congratulations too, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/24/2022 11:59:00 AM
Wow! What stunning vivid imagery! Constance, you should be congratulated on the excellent writing just produced. Kindest regards
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Constance La France
Date: 6/24/2022 4:35:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and the congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/24/2022 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. WOW!!! A beautiful write/picture. Love It and Hummingbirds. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Constance La France
Date: 6/24/2022 4:36:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations comment and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/10/2022 7:25:00 AM
I too love humming birds ! Have written a few poems on them. Your poem gives a glimpse into your garden which is the delightful haunt of humming birds ! The poem and the picture are equally delightful, Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2022 6:30:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, I love hummingbirds and have planted flowers in my garden to attract them and it worked, I just love the video of the hummingbird fountain, blessings ~Constance
Date: 6/10/2022 4:32:00 AM
Yeah! I love hummingbirds too. They are indeed God"s gift to us. You've said so much about them. I think I have to move to another way. A noteworthy poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2022 6:30:00 AM
Thompson, thank you so much for the visit and comment, and the compliment, appreciate, blessings ~Constance

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