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House of Mirrors

Crowds and solitude still
World - a house of mirrors
I'm the spectator, I'm the show

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2012 8:19:00 AM

a very "reflective" poem! and it is so true for all of us!

James Fraser

Date: 1/31/2011 12:17:00 PM

A write that leaves the leader to think, nice one Mohammad....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2009 10:05:00 AM

Interesting idea put to pen in this verse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comment on my work. Sara

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/25/2009 10:04:00 AM

Nice. Pls consider 5/7/5 cylab as: Crowds and solitude..World is a house of mirrors..I'm the spectator; a show. Pls re-entry your haiku; it's beautiful.

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/4/2009 1:22:00 PM

"world a house of mirrors" - a provocative line. Original use of the haiku form. keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Date: 2/8/2009 4:08:00 PM

Interesting use of this concise form. Much to think about here. I hope you'll be back at The Soup posting more poems soon. Best wishes. Karen

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 1/6/2009 11:25:00 AM

right...spectator is the audience. missed that one.

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 1/6/2009 8:18:00 AM

you're the audience too. i'm still getting my head around that. Nicely done:)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/30/2008 11:58:00 AM

So much implied in so few words... the 'spectator/show' idea is brilliant. Best wishes, Keith

Deneen White

Date: 12/28/2008 2:50:00 PM

such a nice write with the depth of introspection of one's self, hi Mohammad, I hope that this finds you well, take care D-ncye

John Heck

Date: 12/28/2008 12:43:00 PM

Very good, Mohammad. The entire mood and introspection revolving around this haiku is exceptional. The last line is brilliant. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Peace always, John

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/28/2008 12:24:00 PM

`great poetry, great lesson, great haiku. thank you for sharing

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/23/2008 6:52:00 PM

Mohammad well written deeply profound write! Laura :)

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/23/2008 3:33:00 AM

I hear you here, the one that sees, and the one that moves thropugh without sight. the goal, is to only left with the observer. awqesome! As always, love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/22/2008 7:26:00 PM

Always much depth and truth to your writing. Wonderful and most interesting haiku. Love, shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/22/2008 12:13:00 PM

Loved this. I love the first line...the many images of yourself giving the illusion of a crowd but only to realize that you are still alone. Nice Haiku.

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