House of Dreams

If you meet me halfway,
I'll take you there,
by car, by plane, or by boat,
our place to share

It won't be a castle,
but a place to roam,
we'll build it together,
our place we'll call home

It will take lots of money,
and take sweat and tears,
but we can call it our own,
all throughout the years

We'll grow old in this place,
with our own loving style,
so build your house of dreams,
with me... for a while.


For "Dream a lil dream, for me" contest sponsored by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:18 AM
a house of dreams sounds great to ME. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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December 9, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! always Michael
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest George. Love, Carol
Edwards Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 12:35 AM
Congrats on your 7th place win in my contest George..such a sweet poem xx
Quigley Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Congratulations on your win George. Well done
Pettit Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Nice simple wording and rhyming makes this entry easy to read and understand. Good job.
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February 5, 2011 at 1:25 PM
a lovely Quatrain, enjoyed reading this one George,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Nice nostalgiac dreams you want to build, george
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February 5, 2011 at 12:38 PM
These are the dreams young people have when first setting out on a life together, George. My late husband and I bought a "handyman's special." It turned out that I was the handyman, but we did make the house our dream home. Love, Carolyn
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