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House of Dreams

If you meet me halfway, I'll take you there, by car, by plane, or by boat, our place to share It won't be a castle, but a place to roam, we'll build it together, our place we'll call home It will take lots of money, and take sweat and tears, but we can call it our own, all throughout the years We'll grow old in this place, with our own loving style, so build your house of dreams, with me... for a while. For "Dream a lil dream, for me" contest sponsored by Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver

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Date: 12/9/2011 10:18:00 AM
a house of dreams sounds great to ME. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 12/9/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win in th Dream a little dream contest!!!! always Michael
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest George. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your 7th place win in my contest George..such a sweet poem xx
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win George. Well done
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:16:00 PM
Nice simple wording and rhyming makes this entry easy to read and understand. Good job.
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:25:00 PM
a lovely Quatrain, enjoyed reading this one George,..p.d.
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:42:00 PM
Nice nostalgiac dreams you want to build, george
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:38:00 PM
These are the dreams young people have when first setting out on a life together, George. My late husband and I bought a "handyman's special." It turned out that I was the handyman, but we did make the house our dream home. Love, Carolyn
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