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House Full of Bugs

While cleaning my house I found two dead bugs They both died inside some empty wine jugs Oh, they disgustingly stunk My guess, they both had died drunk Oh well, they should have stayed under my rugs What's Bugging Me Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues 7-28-2019

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Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 8/13/2019 3:24:00 PM

Charlie: You've got a winner here! I love your wit - good luck in the contest! As an old poop I know always says: I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Many thx for your kind comment re Relief Behind A Tree. True story: When I was with the AF in Bermuda, Gus was our squadron sot. Near the end of the month he would tap me for a loan to quench his thirst altho he was very faithful in paying me back on pay day! Bob

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 8:55:00 PM

Yes they should have stayed outside, period. Well penned fun.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/30/2019 8:33:00 PM

Very, very good and amusing and I refuse to feel sorry for any bug that died while in someone's home especially while feeling better than most bugs ever do! A great 'bug' limerick for sure. Poetry hugs ... CayCay