House Full of Bugs

While cleaning my house I found two dead bugs 
They both died inside some empty wine jugs 
Oh, they disgustingly stunk 
My guess, they both had died drunk 
Oh well, they should have stayed under my rugs 



What's Bugging Me Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues 
7-28-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hinshaw Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Charlie: You've got a winner here! I love your wit - good luck in the contest! As an old poop I know always says: I love great lims and this is a GREAT one! Many thx for your kind comment re Relief Behind A Tree. True story: When I was with the AF in Bermuda, Gus was our squadron sot. Near the end of the month he would tap me for a loan to quench his thirst altho he was very faithful in paying me back on pay day! Bob
Kiser Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Yes they should have stayed outside, period. Well penned fun.
Godwin Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Very, very good and amusing and I refuse to feel sorry for any bug that died while in someone's home especially while feeling better than most bugs ever do! A great 'bug' limerick for sure. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
La France Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Charlie, this is great, delightful and fun, btw , I sent you a soupmail !
Messina Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Thank you DH...Glad you enjoyed!
Laurie Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 1:35 AM
Hello charles ... what a way to go. Quite humorous charles - Lindsay
Messina Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:25 AM
G'day Lindsay … Thank you! - Charlie
Romios Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:24 PM
Funny.. Good luck in the contest PR
Messina Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so much Panagiota :) Charlie
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 1:09 PM
- ... died in happiness intoxication :))) - GL in the contest ... a winning poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Pure happiness (lol) Thanks Anna-Lise :) hugs // Charlie xx
Michael Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Better dead drink that flattened under a rug...choices we all make...
Messina Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 8:27 AM
LOL...true Thanks for the visit Arturo
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