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Halcyon, Heartbroken, House Words Contest       October 7, 2023

Sponsored by Constance La France

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House

"Home isn’t where you are from, it is where you find light when all grows dark." ~ Pierce Brown I once lived in a happy home, overflowing with love, but when I was given cause to leave, it became a house. I've moved on and so has he. I've found contentment. In a sanctuary I reside, complacent without a spouse. I'm not hiding away as a recluse would from the world, nor do I flounder in an ocean of tears, fearing to drown. I never complain of being alone, nor am I ever lonely. My once-upon-a-time home is gone; Camelot fell down. In my new home, I feel protected from Cupid's arrows. No longer am I a target for the imp's misguided dart The last one left a scar that thoughts keep from healing. Since I've moved, I've stitched the open slits in my heart. Walls keep intruders out, but I don't live in seclusion. I have many friends, so don't ever think of me as 'glum.' My house is a haven where only the invited come inside I don't hide my heartstrings, but I choose who can strum. My dwelling is not of brick and mortar, nor cast in stone. I've not become cold natured, heart hardened as a beast, but I will never offer myself again upon a banquet table unless I'm the one who willingly opens my door for a feast. A house can have a hundred rooms, no locks on its doors, plush furniture, Persian rugs on the floor, and fine dishes, but it will never be a happy home to those who live inside unless it's nurtured with love, not with dreams and wishes.
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La France Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Lin, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote, Constance
Lane Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Constance, I always appreciate your contests and your thoughtful comments. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 2:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet sad write/story. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 9:48 PM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Narain Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Nice poem. You have poetic perfection in your humble house, Hope one day it turns into a beautiful home.
Lane Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 9:48 PM
What lovely thoughts, Jay. Thank you.
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 8:04 PM
I hope all goes well for you. Keep writing. Expression is good therapy.
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Thanks, Hilda. This was based on what seems like a lifetime ago. I appreciate your kind concern.
Koplin Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Very beautiful and heartfelt. Sometimes it's hard to move on, but the strong get it done.
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 6:28 PM
Hi Mark. It’s so good to see you and thanks for your insightful comments. It was very difficult but times passes and most wounds heal.
Situation Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 3:29 PM
And I think; is this the way women handle it?
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 4:16 PM
There is no one script fits all. It depends on the woman and the circumstances.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 12:39 PM
aww Lin this is such a heartfelt piece, so glad your house is a haven for you and your loved ones, we can ask for nothing more sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Jan. I am completely happy with my life and those who are in it at every level.
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October 7, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Awww Lin Lane !! Just Bootiful!!…Debx
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Thanks, Deb.
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