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Halcyon, Heartbroken, House Words Contest       October 7, 2023

Sponsored by Constance La France

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"Home isn’t where you are from, it is where you find light when all grows dark." ~ Pierce Brown I once lived in a happy home, overflowing with love, but when I was given cause to leave, it became a house. I've moved on and so has he. I've found contentment. In a sanctuary I reside, complacent without a spouse. I'm not hiding away as a recluse would from the world, nor do I flounder in an ocean of tears, fearing to drown. I never complain of being alone, nor am I ever lonely. My once-upon-a-time home is gone; Camelot fell down. In my new home, I feel protected from Cupid's arrows. No longer am I a target for the imp's misguided dart The last one left a scar that thoughts keep from healing. Since I've moved, I've stitched the open slits in my heart. Walls keep intruders out, but I don't live in seclusion. I have many friends, so don't ever think of me as 'glum.' My house is a haven where only the invited come inside I don't hide my heartstrings, but I choose who can strum. My dwelling is not of brick and mortar, nor cast in stone. I've not become cold natured, heart hardened as a beast, but I will never offer myself again upon a banquet table unless I'm the one who willingly opens my door for a feast. A house can have a hundred rooms, no locks on its doors, plush furniture, Persian rugs on the floor, and fine dishes, but it will never be a happy home to those who live inside unless it's nurtured with love, not with dreams and wishes.

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Date: 10/20/2023 12:50:00 PM
Lin, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote, Constance
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Date: 10/20/2023 1:57:00 PM
Constance, I always appreciate your contests and your thoughtful comments. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/2023 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful yet sad write/story. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Date: 10/12/2023 9:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Date: 10/8/2023 12:24:00 PM
Nice poem. You have poetic perfection in your humble house, Hope one day it turns into a beautiful home.
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Date: 10/12/2023 9:48:00 PM
What lovely thoughts, Jay. Thank you.
Date: 10/8/2023 12:57:00 AM
Beautiful, is late and tired but I associate sometimes houses, and places as good and bad, very hard to explain, but if you know, Knowing me Knowing you, it helps explain! :)
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Date: 10/8/2023 2:42:00 AM
After being friends for years, I’m sure you know me well enough to feel every word in these lines. I know exactly what you're trying to say. ;-)
Date: 10/7/2023 8:04:00 PM
I hope all goes well for you. Keep writing. Expression is good therapy.
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Date: 10/7/2023 8:12:00 PM
Thanks, Hilda. This was based on what seems like a lifetime ago. I appreciate your kind concern.
Date: 10/7/2023 6:23:00 PM
Very beautiful and heartfelt. Sometimes it's hard to move on, but the strong get it done.
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Date: 10/7/2023 6:28:00 PM
Hi Mark. It’s so good to see you and thanks for your insightful comments. It was very difficult but times passes and most wounds heal.
Date: 10/7/2023 3:29:00 PM
And I think; is this the way women handle it?
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Date: 10/7/2023 4:16:00 PM
There is no one script fits all. It depends on the woman and the circumstances.
Date: 10/7/2023 2:26:00 PM
a beautiful piece of writing, Lin. We all need a haven, a safe place in which to dwell. Sorry Cupid's arrow cut through your heart. Sounds like you've reached a place of peace with yourself and who you are. Hats off to you. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara
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Date: 10/7/2023 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. A stray dart has found me again. Lol I didn’t try to dodge this one. All is well and good. I hope your weekend will be a terrific one!
Date: 10/7/2023 12:39:00 PM
aww Lin this is such a heartfelt piece, so glad your house is a haven for you and your loved ones, we can ask for nothing more sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2023 4:12:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I am completely happy with my life and those who are in it at every level.
Date: 10/7/2023 10:31:00 AM
Awww Lin Lane !! Just Bootiful!!…Debx
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Date: 10/7/2023 4:10:00 PM
Thanks, Deb.

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