House

A sturdy structure of brick and wood upon a summit sits The family told that they must leave The bank has won the bet While being evicted from the house, they know all has not been lost They have something priceless that the bankers cannot touch It's all of their fond memories, while living in the house The family gone The house sits dark NO Cheerful laughter Doorbell ring Togetherness at dinner time Hugs and kisses Sleepy heads when the clock strikes nine Warming fire in the fireplace Furniture in its place Fun and games Holiday gatherings Life at all Just a shiny new FOR SALE sign on the front lawn

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Barbara Aquila

Date: 7/11/2018 9:52:00 PM

A house is just a house until we make it a home. An empty house can be a sad reminder . Agree. Well said

Warren Doll
Date: 7/12/2018 8:37:00 AM

How true! Thanks so much, Barbara.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2018 1:53:00 PM

Such a touching piece Warren, a house is far more than bricks and mortar... those precious memories will always remain:-) hugs jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 6/7/2018 6:35:00 AM

I'm glad that you liked it, Jan. How true and thank you for the compliment. Warren:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 7:54:00 AM

- In your house, Warren ... a lovely family :) - A joyful and loving poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 6/1/2018 9:50:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, always a pleasure to hear from you. I'm glad that you liked my poem. Sending a big hug to you. Warren:) :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/31/2018 8:20:00 AM

Warren, this is a very moving statement on what really makes a house a home. We all would do well to remember what is really important when we face troubled times. A wonderful poem !!!

Warren Doll
Date: 5/31/2018 10:58:00 AM

Mike, your positive comments are very much appreciated. You are right, A house isn't always a home. Warren:)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/30/2018 3:53:00 PM

Poignant piece, nicely done.

Warren Doll
Date: 5/30/2018 5:21:00 PM

Maureen, Thank You for the your positive comments. I have been working on this for a few days and I wasn't sure I would post it. Now I'm glad that I did.