Hourglasses and Sand Don'T Mix

Moonlit ride, darling Jasmine at his side
Strode the carpet ride, the night was young
Devil was in the details though, as they glide
Across the desert, time sadly crept and clung

To their faces, bodies, as they were older now
Genie no longer in the bottle but having fun
Freedom tasted sweet i'm sure, but frowning
Was Jafar in his castle from afar, fighting none.

The Sultan too was sad to see, ever older 
The sands of time ravaging them all cold
Twisted rhymes turned the glass over again
Terrible dreams Aladdin thought to himself then

It must be true, about how they were not to mix
Recalling this in his bag of tricks, he deftly pulled
It from his pocket, a trinket frozen in time and six
Magical rubies, put in the hourglass and not to be ruled

By tyranny of chronos any longer, they would be young
Again, but wisdom would be completely lost as well 
So well, back in the pocket and back to the ride he flung
Jasmines arm over his shoulder and all was again swell

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For Sweet Linda-Marie's contest: "DISNEY"
By: Tim Bryant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/11/2012 11:36:00 AM
Like a faiary tale of old, this resonates in a time past that intrigues and delights. I always find something wonderful when Icome Tim. Enjoyed this lovely verse. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 9/4/2011 11:16:00 AM
Wonderful Arabian tale here Tim. Belated congratulations on your fine deserved win. Have a lovely Sunday :)
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Date: 8/16/2011 9:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tim. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:42:00 AM
You made me want to watch Aladdin again! I love that movie as well and yup that sure is one magical carpet ride :) Super congrats on your win , Tim
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Disney" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 3:08:00 AM
hey Tim congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:35:00 PM
Tim, Great to see your worthy poem honored a third place. Way to Go! Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2011 7:29:00 PM
Congrats Tim on third place win in my contest.. wonderful luv..
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Date: 8/1/2011 6:50:00 PM
Has a quality of eastern mystery about it. The rhyme is so special. Well done.
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:55:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Tim...good luck luv... as always I read fully at judging time so as not to spoil my fun ..am sure will be super amazed by its breathtaking content..thankxxx...
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:25:00 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Tim. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your outstanding work. Love, Carol
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