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Hothouse Flower

She's the look of a hothouse flower;
She seems to be losing power-
Like a rose in need of summer shower!
Like a bird retreating to summer bower!

Hair plastered, her dress a mess,
She's been under a current stress.
Susanna didn't mean to transgress,
But, she's a tendency to obsess.

Her eyes wild, and full of remorse,
Desperation left Susanna no recourse.
When comes the time for the discourse,
She shall wilt, of course!

She's a certain look of fright,
In her slow and hopeless flight.
Though none yet know of her plight,
Her future's suddenly not so bright!

She's the look of a desert bloom,
Sweltering in some unhappy room.
Susanna seems about to swoon;
She's danced to the wrong tune!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:33 PM
Enjoyed this light-hearted romp (with a tinge of what-might-have-been), Evelyn. Thanks! ~ Gershon
Buehler Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:05 PM
A pleasure, Gershon! Thank you-I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 6:47 PM
Nicely done, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Thank you, Kim.
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