Hotdogs On the Run

With Baseball hotdogs on the run
Caught up in, excitement and fun
Watch where you go
Before you know
You might slip and fall on your bun!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Ha ha funny good poem, Pat! Such frank en furter humor of spilled ink condiment truth. Jolly jubilant poetry. Love and more love always.
Adams Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Ha! Well, that was easy for you to say! Kind of hard for me to read though, truthfully. But, hey I do appreciate your commenting my friend!.....pat
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:14 PM
oh such clever word play pat lol:-) hugs jan xx
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Thanks Jan. I hope I'm not infringing on your territory!.............80)
Faulkner Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Nobody wants a squashed bun! Fun one, Pat!
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:04 AM
That's right! (Neither one of em!).......pat
Green Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 4:55 PM
That's what I call "being frank". Fun one Pat
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Thanks Chris!.........80)
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