Hot With Spice

Heartbeats like a strong earthquake.
Glistening sweat drips on sheets.
Lips on fire with every kiss.
Two souls become one.

1-14-10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Nice and spicy, cami, good luck in the contest!
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 8:25 PM
From what I see here, you must have had one hell of a good time! Great descriptiveness in this quality dodoitsu.
Parker Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 7:44 PM
Scintillating, sultry write! Good sensory images!
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