Hot Summer Sweat

No lines mark her bronze skin
as she lies in the sun,
bikini top     undone.
Small drops of sweat begin
to form salty rills, in
sultry air they glisten.

Deep sighs through crusted lips,
hand on top, will it stay?
A quick glance, it's okay.
Reaching she rolls her hips,
and from gripped cup she sips,
another     long     hot     day.

Languidly she hopes she'll
increase her sex appeal.


08/17/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/10/2015 9:43:00 PM
Hey, why you say you don't like sonnets. this is not a traditional one, but I sure like it a LOT. Nice sensuous writing!
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:46:00 AM
James, this is subtly sexy. Title just right for the subject. hugs
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James Inman
Date: 8/22/2015 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Kim, the meter is still not quite right, but it is what it is.
Date: 8/19/2015 7:31:00 AM
James sassy sultry imager here.. =")~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, Olive. Always a pleasure to have a visit from you.
Date: 8/17/2015 6:29:00 PM
James, sexy write for the contest and thanks for visiting my weeping poem
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