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Hot Summer Daze

The droplets formed, dangling, on leafy edge sweet flowers gazed in lusty, wanton need warm lingering hopes of summer’s promise awakening the lips of future seed Torturously tantalizing foreplay sun gleaming in a perfect union’s eyes swaying on the brink of love’s disaster clinging to summer moments as time flies But, with summer love, come shadows creeping a darkness that will taint the untried heart leave the leaf and slowly wilting petals the agony of knowing they must part. Love’s hearts have hardened some but still recall a summer heat that bid those droplets fall. ©5/8/2018 submitted to – Summer love sonnet – Poetry Contest sponsor – John Hamilton

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Date: 6/2/2018 7:25:00 PM
Lovely, John. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 5/19/2018 5:41:00 AM
An awesome sonnet... congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/17/2018 10:38:00 PM
Oh John, your glorious ‘summer love’ imagery adorning your beautiful poetic lines is as intoxicating as summertime’s peach sangria - I love both, your superb sonnet and peach sangria! Congratulations on your fantastic win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/17/2018 8:52:00 PM
You really know what I like John, and so you have another top win in my contest, well done!
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Date: 5/17/2018 8:33:00 PM
Wonderful writing. Congrats
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Date: 5/17/2018 7:33:00 PM
Beautiful love sonnet, John. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 5/17/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thanks so much for composing this peppy summer sonnet. Enjoyed the "tantalizing foreplay " that would put anyone in a daze. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/10/2018 8:52:00 AM
Wow John. This poem is amazing! So well done. Good luck in the contest :)
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John Lawless
Date: 5/17/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank You Heidi for your support
Date: 5/9/2018 8:08:00 PM
Ecstasy in words, John. I really, really like this sonnet and admire you, the wordsmith, who crafted it. Should do well in the contest, methinks. Best wishes, Gershon
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John Lawless
Date: 5/17/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thanks for the kind praise Gershon, it is always nice to have you stop by and comment.

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