Hot Summer Day

HOT SUMMER DAY hair’s fallen, wet. clinging shirt with sweat. shoe’s barely protect my feet, from the pavement’s heat. i climb aboard the bus, no air conditioning, of course, and head to the bustling city streets. perspiration stains and inpatient glances all shout, with the fervor of a wet dog, shaking himself. i depart this catacomb. windows decorated with sundresses and sandals. the dummies never bat their eyes nor stink, though the steam seeps into every crevice. i’m glum and irritated, the heat pressing on every thought. i’ve come here to find a gift - and i do i do i do not in the shops but in the street. i hear the uproarious laughter of children. the city street has sprung a fire hydrant leak. oh those tinkling voices, like crystal, lifting up my spirits! oh the joy of splashing waters and the serendipitous smiles! oh how i can live through the glorious eyes of happy children. my heart forgets my complaint. 9/16/2017
Eve Roper’s Hot Summer Day Contest 1st Place
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Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on a 'hot poem". You take the reader from discomfort to refreshment through children's laughter.
Webster Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:09 PM
congrats, kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thank you!
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Congrats Kim, very much enjoyed :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Thank you!
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 10:41 AM
So very well done Kim, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Thank you!
Gentile Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Congrats, Kim on your Hot Summer Day win! Wonderful!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Thank you!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 12:49 AM
Congratulations , Kim on your first placement with a beautiful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 4:20 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, Kim, for entering my contest. You poem gave me a vision of that day, the children playing, the water hydrant, and the steamy day.... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Thanks so much for the win! So glad you enjoyed!
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Congrats Kim on your top win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
One Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Well written Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Thanks so much, Silent!
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