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Who knew that we would find a way To cool ourselves, that summer day Bored with creating ways for fun All simmering in the August sun (Oh, but for a man-made stream!) Gas lines prepped for installation Workers ruining our vacation Still, it was a thing to watch Making bets on what they'd botch (Oh, but for a man-made stream!) We always gave the workers fits Inspiring many a cursing blitz Intent to make their faces blue And blunt the project, through-and-through (Oh, but for a man-made stream!) A stanchion, old and under strain Was precious close to the water main Steel collapsing, someone cursed As sure enough, the main had burst! (Oh, but for a man-made stream!) Repairing mains beyond their skill They left the street and let it fill And much to our extreme delight It wouldn't be repaired that night (Oh, but for a man-made stream!) Well, what a place that street became A wondrous, splashing water game! A miracle sent to cool our steam ... A fluid, flowing, man-made stream! (A silly, sunny, city-kid's dream!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/14/2017 7:53:00 AM
An awesome clever write Greg! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/14/2017 8:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, Cheryl, I had fun with this one - a great contest idea! Blessings, Friend! <3
Date: 9/3/2017 7:58:00 AM
Hi Greg: Great Write! Reminds as a kid splashing under the fire hydrant.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/14/2017 8:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sergi - your kind comment is greatly appreciated! :-)
Date: 9/1/2017 8:03:00 PM
Wonderfully and delightfully written. You are a very creative storyteller. Enjoy!! Best of Luck in Contest!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/1/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thank you SO very much, Alesia - I greatly appreciate the kind words! Bless! :-)
Date: 9/1/2017 5:10:00 PM
This was Extremely well done, Greg! It's a bit like a kyrielle with the repeating line! Love it!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/1/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea, I greatly appreciate that! I make no bones about my ignorance when it comes to forms, so any time you see something I haven't categorized correctly, please let me know ... I'm learning, but a long way to go! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 8/31/2017 8:15:00 AM
Excellent story behind the stream, Greg, the kids sure have odd dreams fulfilled:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/1/2017 10:40:00 PM
Indeed, Jo, you are so right - you just never know! Thanks and blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 8/31/2017 6:00:00 AM
A lovely poem Greg! This is a winner!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/1/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, I greatly value your opinion, my friend ... bless you! :-)

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