Notes About The Poem

Hot Summer Day

Who knew that we would find a way
To cool ourselves, that summer day
Bored with creating ways for fun
All simmering in the August sun

(Oh, but for a man-made stream!)

Gas lines prepped for installation
Workers ruining our vacation
Still, it was a thing to watch
Making bets on what they'd botch

(Oh, but for a man-made stream!)

We always gave the workers fits
Inspiring many a cursing blitz
Intent to make their faces blue
And blunt the project, through-and-through

(Oh, but for a man-made stream!)

A stanchion, old and under strain
Was precious close to the water main
Steel collapsing, someone cursed
As sure enough, the main had burst!

(Oh, but for a man-made stream!)

Repairing mains beyond their skill
They left the street and let it fill
And much to our extreme delight
It wouldn't be repaired that night

(Oh, but for a man-made stream!)

Well, what a place that street became
A wondrous, splashing water game!
A miracle sent to cool our steam ...
A fluid, flowing, man-made stream!

(A silly, sunny, city-kid's dream!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 7:53 AM
An awesome clever write Greg! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Barden Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Thank you very much, Cheryl, I had fun with this one - a great contest idea! Blessings, Friend! <3
Sergi Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Hi Greg: Great Write! Reminds as a kid splashing under the fire hydrant.
Barden Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Thanks so much, Sergi - your kind comment is greatly appreciated! :-)
Leach Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Wonderfully and delightfully written. You are a very creative storyteller. Enjoy!! Best of Luck in Contest!
Barden Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Thank you SO very much, Alesia - I greatly appreciate the kind words! Bless! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:10 PM
This was Extremely well done, Greg! It's a bit like a kyrielle with the repeating line! Love it!
Barden Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea, I greatly appreciate that! I make no bones about my ignorance when it comes to forms, so any time you see something I haven't categorized correctly, please let me know ... I'm learning, but a long way to go! Blessings! :-) <3
Daniel Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Excellent story behind the stream, Greg, the kids sure have odd dreams fulfilled:)
Barden Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:40 PM
Indeed, Jo, you are so right - you just never know! Thanks and blessings, my friend! :-)
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 6:00 AM
A lovely poem Greg! This is a winner!!
Barden Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, Vijay, I greatly value your opinion, my friend ... bless you! :-)
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