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Hot Summer Day

On the lower east side were a melting pot just a bunch of city kids with no sandlot this particular day being extremely hot fanning ourselves with all we got, Hanging around outside on our front steps on occasion going inside not wanting to be a pest Mom suggesting we play jump rope or hopscotch in this baking oven of a day we thought not, We talked and chewed gum looking up at the sun saying wish we could be at the beach having fun we'll take you there one day our parents would say saving their pennies for a rainy day, Then suddenly a kind fireman opened up a fire hydrant a stream of cool water in our street was heaven sent excited we ran and changed into our bathing suits playing in the soothing water and looking too cute! 8-24-17

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Date: 9/18/2017 6:35:00 PM
congrats Cheryl!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/18/2017 8:15:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Jack!~Che :)
Date: 9/17/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl , for entering my contest. .... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/18/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for including me as one of your winners Eve; always a nice surprise for me! Hugs~Che :)
Date: 9/12/2017 11:37:00 AM
Fabulous poem. Instead of longing for the past, always through rose-tinted glasses, why not just enjoy the benevolence of A/C.
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Hannah Borke
Date: 9/15/2017 5:09:00 PM
Oh, the photo. Did you experience the lower east side?
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/12/2017 6:52:00 PM
Sure love that a/c! This poem was penned for contest; its from my imagination…thanks for kind comment and visit Hannah!~Che :)
Date: 8/26/2017 8:46:00 AM
Perfect! Loved the rhyme and could just see it... Nice!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/27/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:28:00 AM
You labeled this correctly, Cheryl. It lightened up my morning!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 8/24/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Lin!~Che :)

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