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Hot 'N On a Roll

When you're hot and on a roll You think you're in control Suddenly ice-cold... What happened to your grip Seems it was illusory ~ You were never Captain of your ship

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Date: 3/10/2022 8:12:00 PM
Funny, from the title I thought this would be about a hot dog :) Still a fun read though!
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Date: 3/9/2022 6:44:00 AM
I live the illusion of being captain of my ship. The only problem is I married the damn admiral.
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Date: 3/8/2022 8:34:00 PM
Sounds like you've tried your hand at water-skiing, gw. That's how I felt. It's been a few years ago now, though.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2022 8:22:00 PM
Actually, I tried my feet at water-skiing a few times, back in the day. Wasn't quite ready to ski on my hands at that point, Milt. ~ Aqua, the Clown

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