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Contest : Alice through the Wormhole 
Sponsor : Tom Woody
29. 7.26
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warm sun sweet liquid
dark moist hole bristles soft sand 
wonder exquisite 
                            *
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                       *           *
                    *    SUN    *
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                          sweet
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                       D  ARK        Q  QQ ||| b r i St  Les                       
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                                         sand ::::::sandcastles:::::::::holes OOO:::birth
                                                                 ing 
ALICE

She basked in warm mid-morning sun drinking rooibos tea with almond biscuits. Her dollies speaking dolly lingo to marching ants. An indigo beam of sunlight rayed into her forehead, delivering jolts to her ladybird reverie. 

Instantly Alice saw it. A tiny dark gasping hole in the flaking courtyard wall through which a caterpillar was  c r a w l i n g, beckoning her to 
f o l l o w.
“Come,” he said, “with me, through MY intricate hole. I want to show YOU wonders beyond wOnders.”
eyes to eyes magnetised 
a curious movement                             SSSSSSS
body lost legs, arms, neck                       SSSSS
brain smoking shrinking                              SSS 
ears disappearing                                          S                 
ribs increasing                                               

                      she felt an organ growing 
                      on the roof of her mouth 
                      transmutation into worm or
                      serpent 
                      how was she to know ?
        
                                                           
Her dollies started whimpering, ants stopped in their tracks, wall flaked some more 
shedding skin
ALICE with two silky plaits, red ribboned tied
GONE to the 
                     BE
                          YOND •••>>>  where no pond rip
                                                                       pled 

black moist silently inward
sumptuous costume velvet 
lime glitter embellished 
crawling  s l o w l y, sleekly 
spine tingling steel pins 
rapidly acquiring density 
            s e r p en t i n e  sword 
            struck swiftly
            penetratingly  

Alice feared losing her
squirm worm
already her mind was 
  L
           O
                S
                    T    

w i t h o u t  thistle  f i e l d s
or jellybeans or colour-in books
lego nowhere = ego shat 
                                         te red

“Feel,” he said. “You can’t talk here, only feel.” She felt liquid through her veins, diluted warm honey, sensing bronzed bristles along the wormhole wall. Justice or Judgement eyes watched intently, though nobody touched. 

             Her forked tongue grew longer
                  licked sides of damp musky hole
                      elongated, she was whole   

dead     alive     SAFE  opened  merging 
slithering deep into belly of volcanic Earth
                  YET….slashed  slimy
s a i l i n g  sand  muddy   SACRED 
worms and serpents crawling beside
behind, ahead ~ 
all heading in  O N E
direction____________where to ?

“This is a pilgrimage,” her new friend remarked.  
Where     t   o   x2x2 ?
thoughts quietly rattled wormy counterpart  ~ 
“To Lord of Light, awaiting in a leather armchair.” 
What must I do there, her thoughts slid along.
“Nothing.”
Then why are you taking me there ?
“To see what NO THING  is.”
How can I see nothing ?     DNA    j     m
                                                          U
                                                                p s
recalibration of
strings and strands ...
                            “Because  NO  T H   IN G  O 
      D            is           Everything...”

They slid  a l o n g  > > ~ ~
slightly more haste
pace becoming faster 
warm breezes flushed her 
trunk. Her intestines becoming 
                       an 
          
               ~~ !!\\\/\/\/\/\!!! ~~~!!

EXPLOSIve  ORANGE RIVER 
GOLD dust tinged ~   flame-purified 
                                   no pebbles no grit no grime

“Feel,” her friend whispered, “we are nearing His g  RAY  sheepskin slippers sprouting WHITE lotuses. He is Nothingness, so don’t be afraid.”
                tingling sensations swept 
                   upwards 
                       from tail end through heart 
                           to centre of her new skull. 
Alice panted hot ice
I want to cry, but have no tears, she thought. 
“HUSH hush hush ….don’t be afraid.”
Her body stiffened
neck area arched
scales curled   f  a  l  l
                                          i
                                             n
                                                   g            
 
webby rose petals faded
through floorless floor
 
NOTHINGNESS  and  EVERYTHING 
flashed   L U M I N O S I T Y   n  a  k  e  d

A   Li  ce     died   ** ¥ ¥¥**  an   e c s t a t i c 
                                     D
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Alice Wanda Adam  ~  1.1.202O  — 1.8.2025 


@never.never.land
                  she frolicked with 
                  Rip van Winkle 
                     who fed her TIME and leechies
                        skipped alongside Goldilocks 
who offered hot cinnamon porridge and 
a silver spoon engraved ~ AWA ~


What is her name ? asked the midwife 
                       “A  L  I  C  E”   replied her Mom              
“Oooo, Sweets, she’s a  WONDERLAND ” a baritone voice chimed, stroking vernix ears.

mohair crochet bootied 
Alice sucked HOT 
mother’s milk
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Date: 8/8/2025 1:57:00 AM
Hearty congratulations on your contest-winning placement, Ghairo, with this intellectually rich poem holding great beauty and imagery.
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Date: 8/7/2025 5:34:00 PM
This surely indicates a good grasp of the prompt. Also written with visual beauts to comunicate words of deep meaning and great intellectual richness. Well done, Ghairo.
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 8/7/2025 6:35:00 PM
I so adore Nigerian feedback. It gives me such a strong African confidence boost to keep going. I appreciate your read & time, Sir. Thankyou for visit.
Date: 8/7/2025 10:38:00 AM
What can I say? Your mind is a deep well of endless images and inspiration. This was Alice on acid. Congrats on placement Ghairo
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 8/7/2025 4:45:00 PM
Thankyou for sponsorship, time & attention, Tom. Yeah, have to feed her more spinach. She struggles with getting acid-alkaline balance right.x.

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