Jan Allison Poet Free verse

Hot Love - For Contest

Susie’s cheeks glowed, her face burning with desire
She began licking her ruby red lips with expectation

So sure tonight was going to be THE night
Susie had waited so so long for this moment …
She was certain she wasn’t going to be disappointed

When she saw me her pupils dilated 
She was feeling hot, so damned hot
Beads of sweat began to form on her brow
Her long dark hair stuck to her forehead
She brushed it away with a flick of her hand

Her pulse rate quickened
She reached out and held me in her hand
Her probing fingers examining every inch 

She opened her mouth 
Pearly white teeth gripped and she bit so hard

YES! YES! YES! YES! Her fiancé screamed, 
He knew how much this moment meant to her ….
After five years Susie had finally won the National Chili eating contest!

Contest – How hot was it! – John Lawless
07~23~15

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James Fraser August 28, 2015 at 4:05 PM Hot, hot, sought not, for it became quite chilli, silly~me for thinking it was, ok, just because, now I pause, congrats now I'm in applause~~Hugs//James xx Jan Allison August 28, 2015 at 4:24 PM I had to have a little twist here James lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eric Boddie August 8, 2015 at 9:07 AM that entertains so very well....chili eating, a marvelous tale....and with you skill, I think I just fell....in Love with this gem, you really hammered that nail....;) Jan Allison August 8, 2015 at 9:39 AM Thanks so much Eric:-)hugs jan xx Eric Boddie August 8, 2015 at 9:24 AM and for all it is worth a much deserved congrats to you....;)

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 9:13 PM Jan, thought I had congratulated this one, but guess I didn't . BIG congrats, my friend!! (I should have gone funny!!) Jan Allison August 8, 2015 at 2:55 AM Thanks Andrea:-) I thought the ending may be too hot lol hugs jan xx

Lycia Harding August 7, 2015 at 7:24 PM Ha! You funny, Jannie, congrats on your win! xoxo Jan Allison August 8, 2015 at 2:54 AM Thanks Lycia:-) hugs Jan x

Eve Roper August 6, 2015 at 10:39 AM Wonderful and funny write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 11:15 AM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. August 6, 2015 at 5:51 AM Jan, l just stopped by to say congratulations on your hot win:-)Alexis Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 5:58 AM Thanks for your support Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A August 6, 2015 at 1:04 AM Jan, Congrats on your Hot, hot win. Love SKAT Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 3:13 AM Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 5, 2015 at 11:41 PM And back again with big congrats Jan and another read on this witty write of yours!! Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 12:03 AM Thanks for dropping by Dr Sharma I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Janxx

John Lawless August 5, 2015 at 10:15 PM Way to go Jan....Chili will get you everything but a second date....A sensual seduction leading to a climactic twist. Thanks for playing in the heat. Jan Allison August 6, 2015 at 12:02 AM Thanks John glad you enjoyed my take on the 'hot' theme:-) hugs Janxxx

Njeri Hunjeri July 26, 2015 at 3:36 AM hahaha that chili must have been reallY hot. this one is a winner Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 5:59 AM The Carolina Reaper - Its the hottest chili in the world Njeri:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 6:28 PM lmao Jan fantastic hugs 7 Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 6:30 PM I did change the poem slightly Shadow I thought it could be seen as being too hot lol:-) hugs jan xx have since seen another poem on a similar theme:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman July 24, 2015 at 11:05 AM one would have to be in love to eat one of those,,,,saw the title thought of Marc Bolan,,,now can see him singing this... Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 12:55 PM Darren Waston and I did a parody of that song under the name Jadazzle United lol - T rex were awesome:-( hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford July 24, 2015 at 6:23 AM Very funny, Jan! A 7. And your ending surprises. Will be a big hit with the sponsor I'm sure. And congrats on your other contest wins. Best of luck, your Friend, ~~Darlene Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 7:23 AM I hope it is not too hot for John lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Wilma Neels July 24, 2015 at 5:36 AM hehehe, I just love this Jan :) Good luck for the contest with this witty write :) xx Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 7:22 AM Thanks Wilma hope it wasn't too hot lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis July 24, 2015 at 5:05 AM You are a teaser and a cheater! You cheated me from my anticipation, dear Jan. From now on I will abhor Chilli! Ha-ha. Great writing, good luck on your contest and a seven to go with! Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 7:22 AM LOL Demetrios - I did amend the original poem I thought it was a little too hot lol:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 24, 2015 at 4:23 AM How sweet Jan ,, ur sizzling words end up in a fine humour,, pure wit that I love,, gl in contest! Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 4:26 AM I hope John doesn't think it is too hot lol:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 23, 2015 at 10:22 PM Jan sweet JAn, hahahhaa!!! Love this! you made me giggle!!! imagery plus the increasing hotness well well! :P!~Olive Eloisa Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 2:24 AM Glad I made you laugh Olive ... I was worried someone might find the imagery a bit too hot to handle lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet July 23, 2015 at 7:37 PM You have a taste for the humorous and an enviable imagination. Well done. Emile. Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 2:23 AM Thanks Emile - I hope this is hot enough for John lol :-) hugs Jan x

Casarah Nance July 23, 2015 at 7:12 PM WOW, that was hot, I was sweating with every word!!...:-) Jan Allison July 23, 2015 at 7:14 PM lol I hope its not too hot for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2015 at 5:19 PM Jan, because I know your personality, I was expecting the twist!! It must have been a chili DOG. hahaha. WAy to make the contest interesting!! Jan Allison July 23, 2015 at 5:25 PM lol I did have the ending slightly different but rewrote it before posting it lol:-) They really do hold chilli eating contests - not my scene at all but I guess some people will do anything to get in the Guiness Book of records lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith July 23, 2015 at 4:40 PM lol....I was wondering what the twist was going to be...now that's hot Jan Allison July 23, 2015 at 4:43 PM LOL Tim you know I am twisted sometimes when I write - just hope it is hot enough for John lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2015 at 4:24 PM a real sizzler, jan... i like how you spiced this up!.. huggs Jan Allison July 23, 2015 at 4:30 PM I hope it's hot enough for the contest - at least its not about the weather lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser July 23, 2015 at 4:20 PM LOVE the twist at the end, Jan!! Great poem :) Jan Allison July 23, 2015 at 4:29 PM I was a bit unsure of the original ending I had written Laura so it has been amended slightly - they do take these contests so seriously - I can't see the point myself but I guess some people simply can't resist the challenge - the Carolina Reaper is the World’s Hottest chilli pepper. :-) hugs Jan xx