Hot Liquid Love

hot liquid love, 
pouring down from the skies,
splashing into your gorgeous, star speckled eyes,
my heart blows wide open,
and cries out in delight, 
the light of you blinding, 
so warm and so bright,
I'm a heavenly feather, 
floating high, and so free,
drowning deep in your heart, 
love's sweet ecstasy.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 4:55 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Fisher Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece, regards Janette
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jean-Pierre. Love, Carol
Mclaughlin Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:49 PM
A great Write, Jean Pierre :)
Zzzzz Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Lyrical and imaginative. A good write.
M Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 9:23 AM
Full of passion. Love it
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