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Based on a joke my daughter sent me:

She said I'm all wet with a yell If doing it now we could tell She'd be satisfied With what was implied But I had no umbrella to sell

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/19/2024 11:46:00 AM

Hello Duke, I agree with Karen, it is naughty. Enjoy your day my cfriend. /darDarlene/

Duke Beaufort
Date: 4/28/2024 12:50:00 PM

Darlene, yes this is a bit suggestive. I hope you enjoyed the humor. It was meant to be cute.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/11/2024 9:12:00 PM

Oh this one is the naughtiest! Love it! So clever

Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/12/2024 10:24:00 AM

Karen, yes I had a lot of fun writing this one. Glad you liked it!

Ink Empress

Date: 3/8/2024 12:40:00 PM

Lol clever one this is! Another brilliant one and i love the picture used there too! Goes so well with your poem

Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/8/2024 12:59:00 PM

IE, This is a collaboration between me and my daughter. She sent me the joke, which had a sexual innuendo, I converted it to a limerick and sent that to her. Then she used AI to generate the image. It only takes a second for the picture to come back. I think it improves the experience we get from reading to have this ability. It's a very rapidly changing world we are in. So much is going to change very quickly.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/8/2024 7:13:00 AM

Slightly flirtatious tone, Duke. Really whimsical it was a pleasure to read

Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/8/2024 12:33:00 PM

SP....yes it was designed to be flirtatious and then crash. My daughter sends me the one- or two-liners for these. It's a diversion from the serious things we really have facing us. You wrote a fantastic poem I just commented on. I wish we could have the whole world read what you wrote and take it to heart!