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Based on a joke my daughter sent me:

hot and wanting it

She said I'm all wet with a yell
If doing it now we could tell
She'd be satisfied
With what was implied
But I had no umbrella to sell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Hello Duke, I agree with Karen, it is naughty. Enjoy your day my cfriend. /darDarlene/
Beaufort Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Darlene, yes this is a bit suggestive. I hope you enjoyed the humor. It was meant to be cute.
Jones Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Oh this one is the naughtiest! Love it! So clever
Beaufort Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Karen, yes I had a lot of fun writing this one. Glad you liked it!
Empress Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Lol clever one this is! Another brilliant one and i love the picture used there too! Goes so well with your poem
Beaufort Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 12:59 PM
IE, This is a collaboration between me and my daughter. She sent me the joke, which had a sexual innuendo, I converted it to a limerick and sent that to her. Then she used AI to generate the image. It only takes a second for the picture to come back. I think it improves the experience we get from reading to have this ability. It's a very rapidly changing world we are in. So much is going to change very quickly.
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Slightly flirtatious tone, Duke. Really whimsical it was a pleasure to read
Beaufort Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 12:33 PM
SP....yes it was designed to be flirtatious and then crash. My daughter sends me the one- or two-liners for these. It's a diversion from the serious things we really have facing us. You wrote a fantastic poem I just commented on. I wish we could have the whole world read what you wrote and take it to heart!
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