John Lawless Poet Senryu

Hot Air - For Contest

HOT AIR/senryu

hot air darkly still
heavy stench of guilt hanging
all eyes fixed on me


John G. Lawless
7/15/2015



for- Senryu of Being Misjudged Poetry Contest
sponsor – Marvin Celestial

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Ralph Sergi July 28, 2015 at 7:45 AM Hi John: WOW! I loved your choice of words! Congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 28, 2015 at 12:39 AM And back again wid big congrats n another read John!

Skat A July 24, 2015 at 4:52 PM JOHN, congratulations, awesome sneryu. SKAT LOVE

Eve Roper July 24, 2015 at 11:39 AM Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 8:32 AM This made me smile John:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2015 at 7:31 PM hmmm, this one can be taken two ways. I will take it the funny way and say LOL!!

Robert Stoner Jr July 16, 2015 at 2:43 PM nice John I feel guilty just having read it. Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France July 16, 2015 at 9:53 AM John, a wonderful 7, darkly beautiful and thanks for visiting my poem, Haiku 13

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 15, 2015 at 10:21 PM Wonderful senryu John! Sure to do well, best wishes!