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Hot Air Balloon





Earthbound creatures they
While I commune with the wind
  Drifting with my dreams

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 14, 2011 at 4:05 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

January 12, 2011 at 1:19 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Barb! Love, Annalise aka (Audrey) Soup now has 2 Audrey Careys, hence the name change.

Kash Poet

January 10, 2011 at 11:08 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your well deserved win in the contest of SKAT!

Poet Destroyer A

January 10, 2011 at 5:58 PM

Barbara,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

James Fraser

January 10, 2011 at 12:34 PM

Super Haiku Barbara, many congratulations on your win in Skat's fine contest....:)

Sara Kendrick

January 10, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Great imagination used..Congrats..Sara

Carrie Richards

January 10, 2011 at 8:00 AM

Drifting with my dreams.....love that line!! Lovely haiku!! Congratulations, Barbara!

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2011 at 7:20 AM

Congratulations, Barbara, I loved the metaphorical quality of this one. Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

January 10, 2011 at 3:21 AM

Enjoyed your haiku BG! Congratulations on your success in the contest ;-) WN

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 9, 2011 at 11:48 PM

Congrats BG on your super success in the hot air balloon contest with this magical piece luv.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..

Skat A

January 9, 2011 at 10:17 PM

BARBARA, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

December 11, 2010 at 3:49 PM

This one is mystical feeling. I really like it! Luv, Andrea

David Smalling

December 10, 2010 at 10:04 AM

Check that parachute, B, or stay asleep ... the balloon is frolicking over the deep ... of my affections. One love.

Nette Onclaud

December 8, 2010 at 5:55 PM

breathless laguage, barbara.. thank you for your greetings regarding deborah's contest; much appreciated! .. nette

Carolyn Devonshire

December 7, 2010 at 6:06 PM

It's almost like an out of body experience you are describing, Barbara. Lovely entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Thanks for stopping by today. Hope your weather is better than ours. Florida is c-o-l-d now! Into the 20s last night. Keep the warm fire in your heart burning and let those dreams elevate your spirits. Love, Carolyn