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Hoss Spital

Whilst the doctors discussed her fate
Her belly inflated with hate
Flat out on a gurney
For one final journey
From hospital food that she ate

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Heidi Sands

April 14, 2022 at 12:12 PM

Lol. So true Rico. I once had a horrible grilled cheese. How did they get that so wrong? :)

Rico Leffanta

April 15, 2022 at 11:09 AM

I think hospitals must recruit Army cooks? Aloha!

Deb M

April 10, 2022 at 8:53 PM

You are funny Mr Rico! Debx

Sara Kendrick

April 10, 2022 at 4:07 AM

This is a good one because of the surprise ending. In a way it is not funny because now I feel that a few people can decide who lives and who dies in the situation our country and other countries or the whole earth has found itself. Thank you for the visit to my page. Sara

Mike Bayles

April 8, 2022 at 11:51 PM

Wow, what a surprising ending. Good rhyme.

Valsa George

April 7, 2022 at 8:56 PM

Your title and limerick are equally good....(harmless too unlike your usual stuff)..... :) Sad a patient has to die in hospital because of hospital food !