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Whilst the doctors discussed her fate Her belly inflated with hate Flat out on a gurney For one final journey From hospital food that she ate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 4/14/2022 12:12:00 PM
Lol. So true Rico. I once had a horrible grilled cheese. How did they get that so wrong? :)
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/15/2022 11:09:00 AM
I think hospitals must recruit Army cooks? Aloha!
Date: 4/10/2022 8:53:00 PM
You are funny Mr Rico! Debx
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Date: 4/10/2022 4:07:00 AM
This is a good one because of the surprise ending. In a way it is not funny because now I feel that a few people can decide who lives and who dies in the situation our country and other countries or the whole earth has found itself. Thank you for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/8/2022 11:51:00 PM
Wow, what a surprising ending. Good rhyme.
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Date: 4/7/2022 8:56:00 PM
Your title and limerick are equally good....(harmless too unlike your usual stuff)..... :) Sad a patient has to die in hospital because of hospital food !
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:53:00 PM
For 100% survival rate, ahi and poi are the safest bets! I hope she wasn't a close acquaintance of yours...ab
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Date: 4/7/2022 2:49:00 PM
LoL! Rico looks like the hospital is drumming up business. enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/7/2022 1:22:00 PM
How true, hospitals are known for their deadly food! :)Paulette
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Date: 4/7/2022 11:13:00 AM
Lol I've often heard hospital food isn't the best, you've just confirmed it. Tom
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/7/2022 11:14:00 AM
Stick with boiled eggs and you may survive! Aloha!

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