Hospital Walk

It takes ten legs squeaking in sneakers
And eight rubber wheels heavily humming
On the checkered sparkling linoleum floor
To move a boy with a tumor
From one hospital floor to the next
For emergency tests

One nurse one doctor a technician leading the way
Mom and dad
Trailing the speeding parade with teddy bears and balloons
And faces full of frowns surrounding a white crib
And a mobile I.V. tower
Thrashing like an octopus fished from water

Whisk

Kicking down the hallways
Onlookers flattened against the walls

Get out of the way

And as all this passes by
From the corner of my eye
I see a creature on a gurney
Unattended
Parked to the side

Fossil of old woman with her head resting
On a mop of white hair
Everywhere
Her skeleton face framed like a crazed witch

No longer Queen dancing in the ballrooms
Toasting friends writing checks signing up her volunteers
Here she is

Abandoned

Vacuuming the stale air through her purple pursed lips
Eyes locked on my boy

Make way
Make way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/8/2017 7:11:00 PM
Such vivid insightful images, we do all come to this no matter how great and important we think we might be and being only one we can;t help them all SuZ
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Date: 2/4/2017 7:54:00 AM
Wow, well writ, I could see, hear, and almost even smell the scene. That's a sticky poem.
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Date: 2/4/2017 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Maureen for the kind comments!
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