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Horses of Mist

A cumulous herd,
Galloping the atmosphere;
Pasture in the sky.

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James Fraser

May 24, 2009 at 11:13 AM

Another cracking piece,James

Brittany Paradis

April 8, 2009 at 10:45 AM

I got some beautiful imagery from just reading those three lines....it's easy when you're an young artist and poet....not yet professional and have a great imagination. *smile*

Chris Goombi

April 3, 2009 at 8:39 PM

Nice herd, clouds make cool shapes.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

April 2, 2009 at 4:11 PM

Dear Raul, I can Picture the photographs this Haiku came from Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

Brian Strand

April 2, 2009 at 12:02 AM

Thank you for your kind words on my blog today Raul.Rgds Brian

Danielle Moreno

April 1, 2009 at 6:06 PM

Nice clouds shapes you talk about, you rock at writing haikus..........Danielle

Abe Lopez

March 31, 2009 at 5:14 PM

sonderful imagery.... I saw this same herd in yesterdays thunderstorm. great write!

March 31, 2009 at 3:05 PM

Interesting analogy--so creative. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words on my haiku. Blessings to you. Karen

Elizabeth Neal

March 31, 2009 at 1:15 PM

A cumulous heard, genius. You bring a enormous talent to the soup.

Laurie Ginn

March 31, 2009 at 1:03 PM

My son and I were playing clouds yesterday, one game you never grow to old for...nice write Raul.

Tyler Martin

March 31, 2009 at 12:54 PM

Great title and haiku, you bring write description in your work. Tyler

Robin L. Gass

March 31, 2009 at 9:50 AM

Stunning imagery, Raul! I love the pictures painted in the sky! Perfect Haiku! Love Robin

John Rhinem

March 30, 2009 at 9:17 PM

Smile~Nice metaphor Raul~For whom knows what chariots are riding behind those horses atop those clouds!? Smile~Well, that would be my thought and take from this wonderful write my dear Brother!:)~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Have A Very Blessed & Wonderful Night~Bye!:)