Horses Ass

Horses Ass
I wonder if you ever think about me
Now that the years have gone by
And who did you finally turn out to be
Once your delusions of grandeur ran dry

Remember we held up in my house for days
Listening to the Dave Matthews band
You weren’t subtle in your arrogant displays
Keeping your sax always close at hand

As a musician, you thought you a maestro
As if bad jazz was a new art form
There was little about music that you didn’t know
Ready to teach but not willing to learn

As for my poetry if I jotted something down
You were quick to critique my form
With enough unsolicited advice to go around
Our relationship became a perfect storm

How can it be that I am missing you still?
Your analysis left me reeling and feeling bad
You always played all of your lovers for a fool
Living without you I ought to be glad

I wonder if you ever think about me
Now that the years have quickly passed
Another great lover who once fell for me
Or just the same old horses ass

9-4-14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/2/2014 4:29:00 PM
Nice job on this. When I saw the title, I thought of Congress.
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Date: 9/8/2014 10:17:00 PM
Wow, had to read this when I saw the title and...fantastic! Thanks for sharing Christine :)
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/8/2014 11:06:00 PM
thanks for the comment david-:-)
Date: 9/6/2014 7:05:00 PM
I am praising your poetry and that fool surely was exactly what you called him. A true horses ass is doomed to always be a horses ass... Does not matter if it is a male or a female.. I have seen them both on display many times in my long life. Egotists that act like THEY made the Universe. Bravo, great write. I am giving it a solid 7!!
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/6/2014 7:32:00 PM
Wow- thank you robert-that's my first solid 7. Psyched! :-)Christine
Date: 9/4/2014 1:49:00 PM
lol, Sounds like you have this person pegged, Christine. Don't know how he could critique your form. Reads pretty darn good to me. ;) Jim
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/4/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Jim for your kind words. I don't really miss him after all. :-) Christine
Date: 9/4/2014 1:12:00 PM
Good one, Dear. So glad you can laugh about it. Better laugh than cry. Enjoyed this read. Unsolicited advice is always a pain in the..... ;)
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/4/2014 1:17:00 PM
Thanks for commenting-we all have one of those guys in our closet don't we? Christine :-)
Date: 9/4/2014 1:10:00 PM
Men like that are a horses ass..there shi* don't stink and they always want to show you how to fix your mistakes. Christine your poetry is beautiful and it should be praised.....hugs Tim
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/4/2014 1:15:00 PM
Tim- I;m glad u understand-good to get rid of the bum!!! LOL
Date: 9/4/2014 12:11:00 PM
Love the humour here but the poem is tinged with sadness - great write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Christine Costello
Date: 9/4/2014 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Jan- I was laughing at myself for missing him-he really was a horses ass. LOL :-) Christine
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