Horses

Her tiny strands of forelock were as soft as silk, resting gently between her poll and soft ears- Her muzzle slightly wet as it began to wilt For she was saddened and brought to tears. She had been racing and fell hurting her back hock, pulled the stifle muscle falling on her croup- She already had a previous injury in her left fetlock, now she was separated from her racing group. You should see her withers on the bottom of her mane, so strong and robust while she ran in the field- She had such class, always winning almost every game, but she also had a problem when it was time to yield. See, she was born with Quiltor, an infection in the lower leg, if drastically affected her frog just underside her left hoof- Her leg would get tired and to her gaskin it had spread, she was still determined to race, but at times very aloof. Her coronet was meant for balance and steadiness, and in her final race you could tell she was prepared- she was excited and filled with eager readiness, although she had some ailments, she was never scared. Words Used: 1. muzzle 2. forelock 3. fetlock 4. hock 5. withers 6. stifle 7. poll 8. croup 9. gaskin 10. frog 11. hoof 12. coronet. Horse Contest Shadow Hamilton October 28, 2016
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Roper Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Love the poem, Laura, congratulations on your win well deserved Hugs Eve
Breedt Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Hi Laura, there this thing with women and horses. My neighbour ,Jimmy is too. Im more a donkey sort of guy but you made me do a double take and convinced me otherwise.well done
Poteet Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:45 PM
So sad for the horse, so happy for you. Congratulations! A nice narrative personification of a horse.
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Such a flowing and well rhymed poem that tells so much about horses, Laura. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Wow! This is really fascinating my dear friend, Laura! Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!
Nayak Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Dear Luloo, wonderful write on anatomy of horses with a smooth flow! enjoyed it! Congrats on your great win!!! //love,Anu:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 11:03 PM
I love the way you made this rhyme luloo...very impressive! Congratulations on your deserving 3rd place win! 7 ; )
Daniel Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Very beautifully written, Laura:) Congratulations on your well deserved placement:)
May Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Great write and win Luloo...Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Your poem is filled with tenderness, much emotion, and instruction. Worth a couple reads! Congrats, Luloo!
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October 28, 2016 at 11:50 AM
That was no easy word list, you made it easily work for this horse's fortitude.
Green Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:22 AM
This was absolutely beautiful Laura. The scene this created was a wonderful sight to see and your use of the words was fantastic.
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