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Horseflies

Who opened the door to let horseflies in? The madness of pursuit - the blood its win.
The bum - offed its keep - not fed. This bugger did die in bed.
Who opened the door to let horseflies sin? 7/26/2019

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Eve Roper
Date: 8/9/2019 6:31:00 PM
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This is so funny, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2019 8:26:00 PM
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Thank you, Eve!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/28/2019 2:31:00 PM
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ha, I liked how horseflies sin is same sound as horseflies in when you put each two words together. Good one. As for getting hubbie when you need him to kill bugs, guess what? in MY home, the hubbie is afraid of bugs and he makes ME kill them!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2019 6:49:00 PM
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Wow! LOL!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/28/2019 12:05:00 PM
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'll try a limerick WBM
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2019 6:49:00 PM
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Cool!
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Silent One
Date: 7/27/2019 6:56:00 AM
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this one made me smile...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:50:00 AM
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Thank you, Silent! :)
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/27/2019 5:32:00 AM
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Thanks for this witty truth that exemplifies your limerick requirement. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:50:00 AM
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Thank you, Beata! :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/27/2019 4:21:00 AM
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I was bitten by one once, and whoever let it in should be flogged. Sweet limerick.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:51:00 AM
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I agree! Thank you, Caren!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 7/26/2019 9:16:00 PM
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Cute and witty and perfect, unlike horsefly bites - I've only had one but it was a yikes! All the best ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:51:00 AM
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Thank you, CayCay!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/26/2019 12:48:00 PM
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Fun and witty Limerick dear, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:51:00 AM
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Thank you, my friend!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/26/2019 12:41:00 PM
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Not me...Only Timmy went out side...I didn't touch that door...You poem is real...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 8:52:00 AM
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I don’t know...your suspect ;) Too funny
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Constance La France
Date: 7/26/2019 10:50:00 AM
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Kim, fun limerick and great example for your new contest, I will give it a spin to see if I can win ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2019 11:37:00 AM
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Good luck!!

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