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Horseflies

Who opened the door to let horseflies in?
The madness of pursuit - the blood its win.

The bum - offed its keep - not fed.
This bugger did die in bed.
Who opened the door to let horseflies sin?

7/26/2019

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2019

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August 9, 2019 at 6:31 PM

This is so funny, :)

August 9, 2019 at 8:26 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

July 28, 2019 at 2:31 PM

ha, I liked how horseflies sin is same sound as horseflies in when you put each two words together. Good one. As for getting hubbie when you need him to kill bugs, guess what? in MY home, the hubbie is afraid of bugs and he makes ME kill them!!!

July 28, 2019 at 6:49 PM

Wow! LOL!

July 28, 2019 at 12:05 PM

'll try a limerick WBM

July 28, 2019 at 6:49 PM

Cool!

July 27, 2019 at 6:56 AM

this one made me smile...

July 27, 2019 at 8:50 AM

Thank you, Silent! :)

July 27, 2019 at 5:32 AM

Thanks for this witty truth that exemplifies your limerick requirement. God bless you.

July 27, 2019 at 8:50 AM

Thank you, Beata! :)

Caren Krutsinger

July 27, 2019 at 4:21 AM

I was bitten by one once, and whoever let it in should be flogged. Sweet limerick.

July 27, 2019 at 8:51 AM

I agree! Thank you, Caren!

July 26, 2019 at 9:16 PM

Cute and witty and perfect, unlike horsefly bites - I've only had one but it was a yikes! All the best ... CayCay

July 27, 2019 at 8:51 AM

Thank you, CayCay!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 26, 2019 at 12:48 PM

Fun and witty Limerick dear, Kim!

July 27, 2019 at 8:51 AM

Thank you, my friend!

July 26, 2019 at 12:41 PM

Not me...Only Timmy went out side...I didn't touch that door...You poem is real...

July 27, 2019 at 8:52 AM

I don’t know...your suspect ;) Too funny

Constance La France

July 26, 2019 at 10:50 AM

Kim, fun limerick and great example for your new contest, I will give it a spin to see if I can win ~

July 26, 2019 at 11:37 AM

Good luck!!

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