Horseback Ride

I rode down yonder cobbled street,
On stones that clattered ‘neath my horse’s feet;
Till we reached a grand lampstand,
That marks the place that ends the land
Where city street meets country lane,
And horses ride in summer’s rain.

Out on the lane with fleet of foot,
We rode a path within the wood;
To wander round bright green trees.
With ruffled mane in a prodigal breeze,
To spy where pale narcissi lay,
And sparrows decked each floral spray.

Where squirrelly clowns cast their spell,
And twining vine where birdsongs tell
Of all the faerie tales when told,
Were all the joys and tears of old,
That lend their gold to aspen leaves,
And flutter gently in the breeze.

Sunbeams shaft thro trees with light,
Taking shadowed wings in feathered flight.
Along a path the sweet primrose,
Nod their heads with crowns of gold;
And as we leave the woods behind,
Meadowsweet’s not hard to find. 

From out the shade and into sun,
I urge my horse to a steady run; 
Clip clop, clip clop the steady beat,
Defines the rhyme of horse’s feet.
She shakes her mane and lifts her tail,
And the light in her eye can never fail.

Through dappled meadow and rutted lane,
We trot the copse through fields of grain;
Where bridal veil of blossoms bloom,
And scent the air with faint perfume.
As we round the corner and take the bend,
Home’s right there, we’ve reached the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/12/2012 3:05:00 PM
Your mastery of couplet rhyming, your cadences, your incredible imagery all combine to endear your poetry to me. If I had to pick a favourite verse here, (tough choice!), it would be the final one. Your passion for horses is on display for the enjoyment of us all. Luv, Keith :)
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Date: 7/8/2011 3:30:00 AM
I've returned to read again this delightful poem. Some lovely imagery. Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/26/2011 6:10:00 PM
This was great fun Elizabeth. Nice to find you here. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2011 6:46:00 AM
Very lyrical, airy and poetic. Could almost be by Wordsworth! Well done. Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/22/2011 7:53:00 PM
your words are a great inspiration in poetry.....very nice.....
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Date: 6/22/2011 7:46:00 PM
You have some affinity with horses:) Great verse here i see , keep at it till your spirits free. love it, Don
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Date: 6/22/2011 5:26:00 PM
Oh, this is magnificent, Elizabeth. Very vivid images throughout the ride. Loved each one of them. Could it be you enjoy riding as much as I do? Carol is going to adore this entry. I can see you put a lot of work into it and came up with a gem. Best wishes for a top spot in the winners' circle! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem. It has a nice flow to it. I wish my experience on a horse was as pleasant as this. Long story
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:16:00 PM
I hope you entered it. I certainly enjoyed the ride.
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:53:00 PM
a fantastic presentation elizabeth.. even the clip clop sounds enhance this wonderful write.. don't know if u had time to enter it into the contest ..hope so... good luck if u did.. it is a very delightful piece luv..
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