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Horse Showing...

I’m standing here so nervous, just about to pass out Terror has it’s grip on me-I’m filled to the brim with doubt My palms are sweaty and itchy, I’m having trouble holding on, What in the heck was I thinking, I should’ve just withdrawn; Now Luck can sense my fear and he’s prancing side to side, On the outside I might be smiling but my gut is twisting inside; The judge is getting closer now, should I be on the left or right, Wracking my brain to remember, no one knows of my plight; I step around my horse’s nose, he’s finally standing still, The Judge is looking Luck up and down with terrifying skill; Things are flashing through my mind, I check them one by one, Did I clip his ears, Did I paint his hoofs, I refuse to be outdone; The Judge is almost finished now, he tips his hat to me, I dip mine back and he moves on-I breathe a sigh of relief; Now all we have to do is wait for his final judgment call, I whisper softly to Lucky, “Soon you’ll be back in your stall”; Waiting now is the hardest part, hoping we did alright, A top ten would be amazing, if not we gave them a good fight; A backwoods girl competing in such a prestigious show, How Luck and me made it this far, I honestly don’t know; The Judge is handing off his card, the results are about to be read, My heart is pounding harder now, my body filled with dread; They start at number 10 then count down to First Place, 10 is called, then 9, then 8-I hang my head in disgrace; I’m certain now that we didn’t place, my dreams are shattered in two, I shake my head in disappointment-So much for our debut; “First Place number 6-6-2 handling Lucky White Star” I’m sure I didn’t hear him right, A cruel joke by far; I stand there stunned to silence, then make my way to the gate, Why on earth did he pick us, My questions will have to wait I grab the blue and pin it on my Luck Mans haltered head Truthfully I’d have been happy with Yellow, White, or Red Shocked and stunned by this happy turn, I show my boy off proud I was hoping for a top ten but my First place won the crowd! ~For the Top 10 Contest~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/4/2010 11:33:00 AM
Tirzah, Congratulations on your HM in this contest. Your poem was so heartwarming it made me choke up. It is a beautiful poem and very deserving. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:06:00 PM
wow, that must have been something. Great excitement in this poem Congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Joe Flach's contest "Top 10". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 3:54:00 PM
Tirzah - a terrific and enjoyable poem!! I really loved this entry - but, it wasn't exactly a list of your top ten - although it was about a finish in the top ten. So, for poetry and entertainment value alone it scored very high, but for fitting the theme of this particular contest I couldn't quite fit it into the top 10. I hope you understand. Otherwise - contest aside - a terrific poem!!!!! Joe
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:10:00 AM
Congrats Tirzah on your HM in the Top Ten contest with this wonderful piece on the horses... enjoy your special honor for your creativity.. with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2010 7:33:00 AM
Congrat, Tirzah on your HM. Outstanding write. Very exciting and suspenseful. Enjoyed. Kudos. Have a really great weekend. All the best, Ralph
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:34:00 PM
Awesome Tirzah.. a wonderful entry for Joe's contest.. it must be a true story too..can envision u in this competition.. wonderful choice for this challenge..good luck..with luv...
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:41:00 PM
Very captivating story that you have penned..I have read your writes and comments so from them I know that you and your family have horses so I am under the understanding that this in a true story so congratulations ....Sara
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Date: 7/10/2010 9:33:00 AM
Tirzah, This is a great story. I hope it is true. Even if it isn't, you need to submit it to "Horses and Hounds" magazine. I'm laughing, now, because I don't even know if there is such a magazine. It was in a "Julie Roberts" movie I watched one time. But any horse magazine might enjoy this poem. It's worth a try. I definitely was on the edge of my seat throughout the read. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 7/10/2010 8:39:00 AM
what a beautiful write for a beautiful named horse congrats if real and gl in contest this made my heart pound too loved the imagery and play on words also thanks for your kind comments on my pal joey keep up the wonderful writing
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:07:00 PM
I enjoyed this Horse Showing with nice expressions. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:54:00 PM
enjoyed!~
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:05:00 PM
If this really happened to you , then you have just lived NATIONAL VELVET. Congratulations, Liz, I hope your violet eyes shone proudly. It takes me there and you seem to have an intimate knowledge of it! Regards, Gerard!
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