Eve Roper Poet Personification

Horse Dream

Wealth dreams of sunshine, as I gallop through fields,
welcome is the rain endless sea of amber it yields.

Through sea of fresh, clean, golden wheat,
new dried fodder stored for the livestock to eat.

I'm constantly told, I am a magnificent looking animal;
I'm a horse, which it's clearly understandable.

My owner pats me a few times, talks in a calm and soothing voice
to let me know that I can trust them; I still have a choice.

They brush me down removing thoroughly of dirt and mud,
brushing my mane and tail, until I'm a ravishing stud.

When all is done, they extend a hand placing a treat
close to my muzzle as I bubble in calm delight over my sweet.


3/8/2020

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Gail Debole March 19, 2020 at 5:18 PM Like your use of personification with this poem. In the mind of a horse...very interesting. Wonder what the thought process really is? Mr. Ed is back again?

Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2020 at 5:59 AM Terrific personification poem my friend!

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2020 at 7:02 PM what a wonderful way you took this challenge, Eve. Very well done.

Charlie Smith March 9, 2020 at 11:47 AM Personification to the nth. Well done Eve...

Constance La France March 9, 2020 at 11:38 AM Eve, lovely, oh this brought me back through the years to my childhood horse, this is a winner for me and a FAV_Constance

Tom Cunningham March 9, 2020 at 5:02 AM Such beautiful creatures Eve, I like how you discribed the life of a horse. Good luck. Tom

Jenish Somadas March 9, 2020 at 12:42 AM Beautifully crafted poem.. Nice personification.. You took the contest to a different level.. Good luck Eve..