Horse-Fly

Yesterday...
I had 
an idea...

today, 
it sifts 
through a

a mesh...
of...
memory:

the 
pebble 
slips 

down 
the hill 
of 

the dune
unnoticed, 
'til 

the 
boy 
kicks

a horse-
fly.
And 

the 
minute 
sun-

bleached 
stones 
are tossed

into 
the air,
in which 

they
resemble 
a chaotic 

dance 
of 
gnats;

and 
the 
edges...

of
the
dune

slide
by 
their 

-hidden figures-

that 
curve
into 

-each other-

like 
the
beach-

grass,
baked
deeply- 

tanned 
streaks 
of 

green
that 
bend 

-and touch-

within 
the salty 
wind.

And 
every
ripple

of 
the
sea

is 
the
twinkle

-of stars-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/6/2020 6:41:00 AM
Formatting is really important to how a poem should be read, and that adds to the feeling in this one..
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