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Brian's 1406 Alliterative Contest ~ 8/24/25

Horrid Heat


            sweltering summer sunshine

summersunshinealliteration

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Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2025 at 9:18 AM

Congrats!! Sara K

Lin Lane

August 30, 2025 at 9:35 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Duke Beaufort

August 26, 2025 at 6:51 AM

Lin, the title and short poem are well done! We are at the cusp of something getting much warmer. This helps those of us who get it!! Smiles!!

Lin Lane

August 28, 2025 at 11:00 AM

Aye, we are, Duke and it's a titch scary.

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 25, 2025 at 11:43 AM

Hello Lin, On a summer sunny day it is cheery. As well as warm . Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 28, 2025 at 11:17 AM

Hello Lin, I hope all is well with you. You are vedry welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Lin Lane

August 28, 2025 at 11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Darlene. Hugs for you, too.

Terry Flood

August 24, 2025 at 2:51 PM

That ought to do it, Lin. Best of luck in the contest. Terry

Lin Lane

August 24, 2025 at 2:55 PM

If not good enough for a placement, at least it's based on reality. lol Thanks, Terry.

Jan Allison

August 24, 2025 at 1:43 PM

you nailed this one Lin!! it sure has been sweltering this year! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

August 24, 2025 at 2:55 PM

We'll see, but thanks for cheerleading, Jan. Hugs.

Gordon Mcconnell

August 24, 2025 at 12:03 PM

Nice three word pen Lin, as words so descriptive and full of meaning. Blessings,Gordon

Lin Lane

August 24, 2025 at 2:49 PM

Thanks so very much, Gordon. I’m grateful for your comments ;-)

Brian's 1406 Alliterative Contest ~ 8/24/25

Horrid Heat

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