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Brian's 1406 Alliterative Contest ~ 8/24/25

Horrid Heat


            sweltering summer sunshine

summersunshinealliteration

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2025 9:18:00 AM

Congrats!! Sara K

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2025 9:35:00 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/26/2025 6:51:00 AM

Lin, the title and short poem are well done! We are at the cusp of something getting much warmer. This helps those of us who get it!! Smiles!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/28/2025 11:00:00 AM

Aye, we are, Duke and it's a titch scary.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2025 11:43:00 AM

Hello Lin, On a summer sunny day it is cheery. As well as warm . Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/28/2025 11:17:00 AM

Hello Lin, I hope all is well with you. You are vedry welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Lin Lane
Date: 8/28/2025 11:00:00 AM

Thank you very much, Darlene. Hugs for you, too.

Terry Flood

Date: 8/24/2025 2:51:00 PM

That ought to do it, Lin. Best of luck in the contest. Terry

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2025 2:55:00 PM

If not good enough for a placement, at least it's based on reality. lol Thanks, Terry.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2025 1:43:00 PM

you nailed this one Lin!! it sure has been sweltering this year! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2025 2:55:00 PM

We'll see, but thanks for cheerleading, Jan. Hugs.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/24/2025 12:03:00 PM

Nice three word pen Lin, as words so descriptive and full of meaning. Blessings,Gordon

Lin Lane
Date: 8/24/2025 2:49:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Gordon. I’m grateful for your comments ;-)

Brian's 1406 Alliterative Contest ~ 8/24/25

Horrid Heat

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