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Sipping from the well of sorrow withstands an unusual life cast. Sad rivers and sifting sand remain tuck away this tragic river apart from the entire world. Tears stream down my chin a liquid flow of unending love. A waterway radiates pure splendor. Isn't it frightening to adore... something death may reach? A frightening thing for... loving, longing, dreaming, being. Under a willow tree... might lay weary love to sleep. Your vitality lifted my spirits your chuckle often buoyed my mood your feelings brought me haughty joy, to put everyone on the trail of spring. When I ween back, I feel inane bliss, it's a story of kindness and love, for love is a noble deed... a sacrament, a divine insight... to love what demise has swayed. I planted an elfin orchard, in a corner of my heart, it was my sanctuary, a place for everything I loved, music was sung, and flowers bloomed, fine stars, like dew, clog it up to the brim. Torn foam rose and was hauled away Once the wave fades by a surge of water, but it was never flawless right up till you walked inside. I had to modify my daily life, from that day on, you were taken away back to your home, which is nothingness I got used to the stillness I had to talk every time I sobbed I learned to cope with the discomfort yet, recalling you keeps you close to my heart. Life is so challenging without you, I feel peace now that you are in eternal bliss I love knowing that you feel me But coping with hardship is tough to diss. with eyes that may endure, and fingers that may delight hands, still, you might be for your swooning partner: just a whisper.
Written: January 20, 2023 Loved And Lost Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 1/28/2023 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lasaad! :)
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Date: 1/27/2023 8:12:00 PM
The feelings of love you had for your dear partner and the sense of loss you experience at her departure.... both are so touchingly delineated. Though we get acclimatized to that loss in time, we will be occasionally haunted by sad remembrance. A poem that tugs at the heartstrings. Congratulations dear Lasaad on your great win....
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Date: 1/21/2023 5:25:00 AM
Saddened in loss of beloved--powerful, emotive write my friend--Life is so challenging without you, I feel peace now that you are in eternal bliss. I love knowing that you feel me.
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Date: 1/21/2023 2:16:00 AM
Stupendous poem even if sad. Love lost is always a winner.
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Date: 1/21/2023 12:37:00 AM
Oh my gosh Sotto, my heart broke reading your beautiful, tragically sad poem of love and loss. Your poetry is amazing. Another fave for me.
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