Hoping the Flowers Bloom

Hoping the flowers bloom

Sifting through my day,
withered masses of an old heart
searching in the wrong corner,
dreaming in muted grays on a white background,
wandering through the garden
of my every lost dream,

hoping the flowers bloom . . .
and I get to see them

Long hours only offer relief
when I look past the walls
formed around my smile so long ago, 
they are now only a faded memory
flickering in and out,
losing clarity

Then out of nowhere comes a light, 
so brilliant, beautiful, electrifying
I can only stare and wonder, 
is this for me to keep, 
or dare I say . . . to love? 
Love, now that’s a laugh 

Love only finds those who deserve it 
and those signs have long since
pointed a different direction
But a voice speaks otherwise
a soft tone, a sweet noise I’ve not heard
or imagined . . .  

When whispers of affection from her
fall upon my ears . . . my ears?
Like I am something, somebody, and it feels good 
even if it is still hard to believe
And I feel tears forming, could this be happiness
I ask, when there before my misted eyes 
 
The flowers are blooming . . .
and I can see them
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/29/2018 7:42:00 PM
Beautifully written Chris. Exactly what you deserve my friend! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/31/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi.
Date: 4/19/2017 4:49:00 AM
You are deserving of love, so listen to that voice my friend. For you are someone, someone, more than that actually. And you deserve every happiness that comes your way :) There, take your flowers, and believe it.... Oh, and Lisa? She honestly told me that :) And she is right you know.... For me you are one of the best poets here, and one of the few I learn so much from.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren. You always send such kind thoughts my way and I could not appreciate your generosity or friendship more. Thank you for bringing a smile to me each day.
Date: 4/18/2017 10:53:00 PM
Oh Chris, you could romance a princess right out of her crown! To say I was moved by this magnificent piece would be a gross understatement. This is the kind of poetry that belongs in books, books for other poets to buy and become inspired by. Another Fave for me! Your poetry leaves me breathless and yearning for more! 10 ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 4/19/2017 8:25:00 AM
Connie, what a beautiful thing to say to me. You have no idea how your comments affect me. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this piece. Your kindness brings a beautiful bouquet of flowers to my world. Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 4/18/2017 5:43:00 PM
-- Smile --
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Date: 4/18/2017 5:31:00 PM
Chris Chris Chris. I just got through saying this to Darren in a review of his work and now I must repeat the same words because they apply here as well. You are killing me kid with such beauty. I have no words or adjectives to describe such work in my eyes. You deliver the emotive element each and every time and it is so present here in this entry alone. Please be proud of your work creations and your skill because you have it all in my eyes. Have a wonderful night.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 5:41:00 PM
Lisa, I am humbled and I think I am blushing now. Thank you, thank you, thank you so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed reading this one though I still don't see in my work what you do, but I suppose that is what we hope for. That another finds something in our words that they can feel and dream and relate to in some way. Your thoughts about my poetry are always encouraging and I thank you again my friend.
Date: 4/18/2017 4:54:00 PM
The flowers will bloom and bring forth love, all in its season. Beautiful poem, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much Abosede for your kind thoughts on my poem. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 4/18/2017 2:40:00 PM
You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words, and they come alive as they impart feelings onto the page. Emile. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 2:48:00 PM
Thanks so very much Emile. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 4/18/2017 2:26:00 PM
you bloom with this mellow work so well executed... romance is in the air, chris.. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so very much Nette, You are always so kind to me
Date: 4/18/2017 12:01:00 PM
She is lucky to have you...love has blossomed
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 12:52:00 PM
I think I am the lucky one. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 4/18/2017 10:46:00 AM
Chris, your incredible poem brings clarity to the soul, the heart, and the mind as flowers bloom from verse to verse pouring out in the most enchanting of tones. A favorite, sorry they limit us to 7 here:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:12:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much Anne Marie. That is such a nice thing to say. You are always so kind to me.
Date: 4/18/2017 10:25:00 AM
My friend, Chris, the flowers never stop blooming on my roof garden for they obey God's eternal wish of beautification of His world so in the same way Love never stops embracing the hearts of men for God wishes us to be happy, especially good people like you! When the time is right without asking love pays each heart a visit! Beautiful poem. A 7!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thanks so very much Demetrios, even your comments are uplifting and encouraging just like your poetry. I appreciate so much you stopping by today and leaving your insight and wonderful thoughts for me
Date: 4/18/2017 10:16:00 AM
Just amazing write Chris!!! Beauty! Such a deep meaning, especially "love only finds those who deserve it" A fav and a 7, Chris :) shubham
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kindness my friend. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 4/18/2017 9:47:00 AM
You are not something..You are someone...somebody...and you deserve affection,happiness and love.Every human does..and some deserve it a bit more than others. I hope the scent of those flowers will never fade and may they bloom throughout the four seasons.So beautiful your poem.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/18/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. With friends like you, I see flowers (and my smile) blooming all of the time. I appreciate your kindness always.
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