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Hopetanka Contest Entry

with unspoken words I cry for my yesteryears before the spiral and pray the skies high above lead me to the right road back Maurice Yvonne August 26 2014 Regina Riddle Contest: Hope, Faith and Love Tanka

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 11:07:00 PM

Cooties, is correct.... LOL..I got a bottle of hand sanitizer, ... SO no, cooties crossed my way...LOL oh, yes... TAG TAG... LINDA

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:22:00 AM

i'm it. you can run but...well...you know the rest. i will avenge my tag honor or some gooblygook like that.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2014 1:59:00 AM

Nice expressions well penned, Maurice. congrats

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:24:00 AM

i am so sorry. i only just notice that i forgot to reply here. thank you.

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2014 4:55:00 PM

Maurice, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:26:00 AM

thank you i had missed replying to this kind remark.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 2:04:00 PM

Hi Maurice, Congrats on your tanka, it's all about "Hope, Faith and Love" always~ Linda

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:27:00 AM

tag your it.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2014 11:27:00 AM

many congrats on your placement in the contest Maurice:-) hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:28:00 AM

i had missed this one so sorry. Thank You

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 8/28/2014 9:50:00 AM

Very nice.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:30:00 AM

yes you are and i am sorry i missed replying to your kind words.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 9:38:00 AM

Great tanka Maurice and I love the title :-) Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2014 9:50:00 AM

You do make me smile Maurice lovely to see someone with a similar sense of humour! Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/26/2014 9:48:00 AM

i was tanked when i wrote it. i am lying i don't drink other than water. thank you for visiting and your unconditional support. this of course is my first tanka ever. oh my goodness i am no longer a tanka virgin this contest broke my cherry...like complexion. ok even i lost me. bye.