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September 23, 2024

"Pie In The Sky" Premiere Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Suzette Richards

Placed SEVENTH

Hopes Soar

Composed a poem for CONTEST, hoping to be the BEST,
waited anxiously for results days and nights,
no response RECEIVED, disheartened I felt...
with passion I WEAVED, a tapestry with words
depicting symphony of sunrise - chimes
from a temple SOAR in melodious GALORE!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 10/8/2024 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my Pie-in-the-sky contest. Thank you for entering. Regards, Suzette
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/9/2024 5:18:00 PM
Thanks, Suzette. it's an honour!
Date: 10/2/2024 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations dear Mala! :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/9/2024 5:19:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Linda. So glad to see you here! Love ~
Date: 9/25/2024 10:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Hope Soar" write.  "Good Luck"  Have a fun day as you write away.............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/26/2024 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Paula, for dropping by and commenting. An experiment with internal rhymes!
Date: 9/23/2024 3:55:00 PM
Hello Mala, I guess to pick the best poem for a contest is hard. Everyone enter the contest with their poems ,is hard to choose to choose the best one. friendship & Love, /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2024 9:41:00 AM
Hello Mala, Your turn will come. It will probably another poetry form. Love & Friendship// Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/23/2024 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Darlene! I agree with you. Love and friendship ~ Mala
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