Hopes Soar

Composed a poem for CONTEST, hoping to be the BEST,
waited anxiously for results days and nights,
no response RECEIVED, disheartened I felt...
with passion I WEAVED, a tapestry with words
depicting symphony of sunrise - chimes
from a temple SOAR in melodious GALORE!

inspirationfree verse

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Suzette Richards

October 8, 2024 at 8:49 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my Pie-in-the-sky contest. Thank you for entering. Regards, Suzette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

October 9, 2024 at 5:18 PM

Thanks, Suzette. it's an honour!

Linda Alice Fowler

October 2, 2024 at 7:16 AM

Congratulations dear Mala! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

October 9, 2024 at 5:19 PM

Thank you, Dear Linda. So glad to see you here! Love ~

Paula Goldsmith

September 25, 2024 at 10:47 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Hope Soar" write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day as you write away.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

September 26, 2024 at 6:53 AM

Thank you, Paula, for dropping by and commenting. An experiment with internal rhymes!

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 23, 2024 at 3:55 PM

Hello Mala, I guess to pick the best poem for a contest is hard. Everyone enter the contest with their poems ,is hard to choose to choose the best one. friendship & Love, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 24, 2024 at 9:41 AM

Hello Mala, Your turn will come. It will probably another poetry form. Love & Friendship// Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury

September 23, 2024 at 4:16 PM

Thanks Darlene! I agree with you. Love and friendship ~ Mala