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Hope Seeds Happiness In Dry Tear Drops

HOPE SEEDS HAPPINESS IN DRY TEAR DROPS

Soaring storm seethes in scared sky
Tracks tormenting terror in the air
The stratified wind doesn’t know why
The harsh turbulence it should share.

Afflicting anger flares in spiteful mind
Smolders sullen life to form extant ember
The anguished ashes fly far, fail to find
The rationale why empathy doesn’t care.

Heaving haze hangs on the humid horizon
Spreads shroud of glazed gloom on atmosphere
Confused clouds drift away from the shy sun
Hoping from dark a bright day would appear.

Seething sorrow simmers in marooned mind
Permeates pain in life drowned deep in despair
Serene soul blooms bliss for agony to rescind
Sedate hope seeds happiness in dry drops of tear.

March 28, 2018

Copyright © Subimal Sinha-Roy | Year Posted 2018

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Eve Roper Date: 4/3/2018 9:49:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Subimal, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/9/2018 12:24:00 AM Thank you, Eve.

Line Gauthier Date: 4/3/2018 3:42:00 PM Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/9/2018 12:24:00 AM Thank you, Line.

Elaine George Date: 4/3/2018 7:43:00 AM Lovely alliteration, many congrats on your win. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/9/2018 12:24:00 AM Thank you, Elaine.

Judith S Date: 4/2/2018 7:48:00 PM So well done Subimal! Congratulations on your win! Best, Judy Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/2/2018 11:13:00 PM Thank you, Judy.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/2/2018 8:45:00 AM Congrats! Love the line: Heaving haze hangs on the humid horizon Spreads shroud of glazed gloom on atmosphere Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/2/2018 11:13:00 PM Thank you, Kim.

Susan Ashley Date: 4/1/2018 8:36:00 PM A beautiful alliteration poem Subimal filled with powerful poetic lines of amazing imagery.. 'Seething sorrow simmers in marooned mind' - simply stunning. Congratulations on your excellent win.. Warmest wishes. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/2/2018 11:14:00 PM Thank you, Line for liking the poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 3:26:00 PM - The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/2/2018 11:14:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Silent One Date: 4/1/2018 2:48:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 4/2/2018 11:14:00 PM Thank you, Silent One for the placement.