Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Alliteration

Hope Seeds Happiness In Dry Tear Drops

HOPE SEEDS HAPPINESS IN DRY TEAR DROPS

Soaring storm seethes in scared sky
Tracks tormenting terror in the air
The stratified wind doesn’t know why
The harsh turbulence it should share.

Afflicting anger flares in spiteful mind
Smolders sullen life to form extant ember
The anguished ashes fly far, fail to find
The rationale why empathy doesn’t care.

Heaving haze hangs on the humid horizon
Spreads shroud of glazed gloom on atmosphere
Confused clouds drift away from the shy sun
Hoping from dark a bright day would appear.

Seething sorrow simmers in marooned mind
Permeates pain in life drowned deep in despair
Serene soul blooms bliss for agony to rescind
Sedate hope seeds happiness in dry drops of tear.

March 28, 2018

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Eve Roper April 3, 2018 at 9:49 PM Congratulations on your win, Subimal, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`* Subimal Sinha-Roy April 9, 2018 at 12:24 AM Thank you, Eve.

Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 3:42 PM Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your win. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 9, 2018 at 12:24 AM Thank you, Line.

Elaine George April 3, 2018 at 7:43 AM Lovely alliteration, many congrats on your win. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 9, 2018 at 12:24 AM Thank you, Elaine.

Judith S April 2, 2018 at 7:48 PM So well done Subimal! Congratulations on your win! Best, Judy Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:13 PM Thank you, Judy.

Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2018 at 8:45 AM Congrats! Love the line: Heaving haze hangs on the humid horizon Spreads shroud of glazed gloom on atmosphere Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:13 PM Thank you, Kim.

Susan Ashley April 1, 2018 at 8:36 PM A beautiful alliteration poem Subimal filled with powerful poetic lines of amazing imagery.. 'Seething sorrow simmers in marooned mind' - simply stunning. Congratulations on your excellent win.. Warmest wishes. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:14 PM Thank you, Line for liking the poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 3:26 PM - The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:14 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Silent One April 1, 2018 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Subimal Sinha-Roy April 2, 2018 at 11:14 PM Thank you, Silent One for the placement.