Hope Emerging From the Rubble

Devastation turned to joy
when searchers heard a muffled sound
and found a tiny, frightened boy
beneath the rubble on the ground.

He lay, unhurt, surrounded by
the storm's debris and clinging to
a blanket. He began to cry,
as did the entire rescue crew.

Still holding to that blanket, he
was lifted from the ruins while
nearby his grieving family,
though lying injured, soon would smile.

Like trinkets, trees and home were tossed
throughout the town, but on that day
of miracles, no lives were lost.
They'll rise, rebuild, rejoice, and pray.


October 20, 2020
entered in Craig Cornish's After the Hurricane Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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October 21, 2020 at 8:37 AM
You did this very well, so much is lost sometimes with such events and it is understandable when hope is lost, but there have also been miracles... brilliant write.
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October 22, 2020 at 7:44 AM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
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October 21, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Love this, dear lady. It's amazing and inspiring. LOVE it. God bless you with a win.
Canerdy Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 7:45 AM
Regina, thanks a million! Janice
Bauer Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 2:01 PM
just brilliant, janice!
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October 20, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
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October 20, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Well done for being one of the first to attempt a poem for Craig's challenge, Janice. I really enjoyed the story disclosed and the flow of the narrative.
Canerdy Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Thanks so much, Wendy. Janice
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