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Hope Emerging From the Rubble

Devastation turned to joy when searchers heard a muffled sound and found a tiny, frightened boy beneath the rubble on the ground. He lay, unhurt, surrounded by the storm's debris and clinging to a blanket. He began to cry, as did the entire rescue crew. Still holding to that blanket, he was lifted from the ruins while nearby his grieving family, though lying injured, soon would smile. Like trinkets, trees and home were tossed throughout the town, but on that day of miracles, no lives were lost. They'll rise, rebuild, rejoice, and pray. October 20, 2020 entered in Craig Cornish's After the Hurricane Contest

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Date: 10/21/2020 8:37:00 AM
You did this very well, so much is lost sometimes with such events and it is understandable when hope is lost, but there have also been miracles... brilliant write.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/22/2020 7:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, S.O. Janice
Date: 10/21/2020 4:37:00 AM
Love this, dear lady. It's amazing and inspiring. LOVE it. God bless you with a win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/22/2020 7:45:00 AM
Regina, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 10/20/2020 2:01:00 PM
just brilliant, janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Date: 10/20/2020 12:02:00 PM
Well done for being one of the first to attempt a poem for Craig's challenge, Janice. I really enjoyed the story disclosed and the flow of the narrative.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/20/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Wendy. Janice

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