Pandita Sietesantos Poet Monorhyme

Hope

Hope

Hiking through the dark, watchful woods all night
Looking for any star that’s bright
Not a single living soul in sight
Only creepy, crawly critters in the shadows to my left and right
Imagine my plight
Eyes wide open, intently praying with all my might
And to my great delight
In spite
Of my overwhelming fright
Finally saw a faint streak of light
Up ahead – peeking in – a welcoming daylight!


05-23-2014

Contest:     A poem you have not entered in a contest #5
Sponsor:    Poet Destroyer A 
Placement:  9th

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Toni Orban December 11, 2015 at 3:59 PM Love this whimsical rhyming small journey I traveled...thrilling uncertain night into the day. Pandita Sietesantos December 12, 2015 at 8:14 PM Hi Toni, I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita

Liam Mcdaid November 1, 2014 at 10:54 AM hope always shines such a light excellent pen very beautifully painted deep piece Pandita Sietesantos November 1, 2014 at 1:15 PM Hi Liam, I am so glad that you like this piece and enjoyed it. Many thanks for visiting. Best wishes.

Maritza Pagan October 21, 2014 at 1:04 PM Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing. Pandita Sietesantos October 21, 2014 at 8:17 PM Maritza, I am so glad that you like this piece and enjoyed it. Many thanks for visiting. Best wishes. Pandita

Jim Mayrose September 21, 2014 at 8:49 AM Nicely done, great write..... Pandita Sietesantos September 21, 2014 at 1:11 PM Hi Jim, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind compliments. Pandita

Patrick Nigros July 29, 2014 at 12:49 PM hope..... nice one, HOPE ., HOW BEAUTIFULL Pandita Sietesantos July 29, 2014 at 3:26 PM Many thanks, dear Patrick for your wonderful compliments which made my day!!!

Kika Ayala July 9, 2014 at 1:01 AM I love this poem. The imagery is amazing. Kika. Pandita Sietesantos July 9, 2014 at 1:10 AM Kika, I am so glad that you like this piece and enjoyed it. Many thanks for visiting. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A May 25, 2014 at 9:16 AM thank you for the comment on my comment..PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 24, 2014 at 6:48 AM Great write Pandita ! Congrats on a merited win ! Pandita Sietesantos May 24, 2014 at 7:28 PM Thank you, Dr. Upma. I appreciate the encouragement and I am also inspired by your great writes!

Verlena S. Walker May 24, 2014 at 12:59 AM Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena Pandita Sietesantos May 24, 2014 at 7:26 PM Verlena, thank you so much for your kind comments! Hugs to you too!

Robert Lindley May 23, 2014 at 9:16 PM Congrats on the win my friend! Pandita Sietesantos May 23, 2014 at 10:14 PM Thank you, thank you, thank you, Robert! Really appreciate your kindness!

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2014 at 10:26 AM PANDITA, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda Pandita Sietesantos May 23, 2014 at 11:20 AM Thank you so very much, Linda. I am so delighted and encouraged by placing in your contest. Hugs to you too!!!

Robert Andrew Lyle May 16, 2014 at 4:45 AM Good write Pandita nice use of alliteration nearly out of the woods. Andy Pandita Sietesantos May 16, 2014 at 9:14 PM Robert, thank you so very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 8:23 AM - A very good poem, Pandita - never lose hope :)) - glad that I chose to read this today - thank you - Have a beautiful day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Pandita Sietesantos May 14, 2014 at 8:53 AM Anne-Lise, thank you so much for for lovely comments. I really appreciate the, my friend. Love to you!!!!!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 14, 2014 at 5:29 AM hopeful poem indeed good that there is light.. :) few words but speaks of volumes.. :)c, great write, olive eloisa Pandita Sietesantos May 14, 2014 at 8:12 AM Thank you so much for your comments, Olive Eloisa!

Sara Kendrick May 13, 2014 at 6:20 PM That would be scary indeed..I hope just a metaphor for something else..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 8:36 PM Hi Sara, thank you very much for selecting my poem to read and thank you for your kind comment.

Elaine George May 13, 2014 at 4:35 PM Beautiful imagery - I can see it all so vividly. thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments today, Pandita. Lainie Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 8:35 PM Hi Lainie, thank you so very much and let's visit often!

Anthony Tony D Punstar Massy May 13, 2014 at 11:51 AM Nice 1 Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 12:00 PM Thank you so much, Anthony!

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2014 at 7:39 AM Hi Pandita, Life certainly has moments of fright, filled with "creepy, crawly critters." Your poem astutely notes that prayer and hope will help us survive these dark moments by finding the light. Awesome! Best wishes, Carolyn Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 8:21 AM Hi Carolyn, I so appreciate your kind comments! Thank you!

Heather Secrest May 13, 2014 at 6:33 AM Beautiful imagery and poem! thank you for sharing with us! A new look on a new day. Great write!! ~Heather Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 6:37 AM Heather many thanks for the compliment!

David Williams May 13, 2014 at 2:42 AM Pandita a good image...David Pandita Sietesantos May 13, 2014 at 6:36 AM Thank youvery much, David!

Pernell Rodocker May 12, 2014 at 6:17 PM This speaks volumes in both emotion and literary... I like it... PR Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2014 at 8:41 PM Pernell, thank you so very much. I appreciate this!

Louis Rams May 12, 2014 at 11:10 AM OUT OF THE DARKNESS AND INTO THE LIGHT THIS POEM IS SHEER DELIGHT Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2014 at 11:27 AM Many thanks, Louis. I appreciate your kind comments.

Sarai Virden May 12, 2014 at 10:45 AM Very beautiful, first hunting trip? Great write! Pandita Sietesantos May 12, 2014 at 11:30 AM Sarai, thank you, thank you! This was recalling a midnight hike!

Verlena S. Walker May 11, 2014 at 9:17 PM Excitement and elation... Nicely done Pandita. Verlena Pandita Sietesantos May 11, 2014 at 9:22 PM Verlena, many thanks for the encouragement.

Robert Lindley May 11, 2014 at 8:34 PM Very nice play on words.... A trip from darkness into daylight and nothing about it was at all trite.. Bravo... Pandita Sietesantos May 11, 2014 at 9:12 PM Thank you so much for your compliment. I really appreciate it,