Hope

The tumultuous sea of foam Churned by the night winds and haunting souls Natures gales bring forth torrential sadness tossing boats, upon a briney sea The trees bend slightly in the wind, Uprooted by natures decree Young birds quiet, held in deaths embrace Waiting for the stillness, to chirp and sing Begot dark thoughts leave me shine, Allowing life to enter my soul, Lighten my heart to accept whats mine, My Heart once broken. Fulfilled by a tranquility of hope and love penned by Seren Roberts and Arthur Vaso

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/31/2013 2:35:00 PM

"nightwinds and haunting souls. Nice words indeed you 2. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/31/2013 4:51:00 PM

hello Matthew thanks for stopping by and commenting ....Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 8/31/2013 10:15:00 AM

I like it, one line looks pretty familiar lol. It is not what I expected from the title. I guess there's a message of what slows hope or a struggle to see or feel hope, but I do like dark poems, what can I say, this has some romanticism about the darkness as well, good work, maybe it isn't even that dark lol maybe it's just me. Good worth to both of you.

Wayland Bunch
Date: 9/1/2013 12:49:00 AM

lol isn't it the exact same line. I didn't mean it bad lol, they are your words anyway, I don't know how many times I've repeated my own words, maybe too much lol.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/31/2013 2:24:00 PM

yes i saw what you meant

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/31/2013 11:00:00 AM

I dont think so Wayland, maybe just similar thoughts...Thanks for stopping by...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/31/2013 5:36:00 AM

Life is such mixture of hope and despair

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/31/2013 2:24:00 PM

thanks for commenting...Seren

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/31/2013 3:47:00 AM

VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/31/2013 2:24:00 PM

Thank you Liam nice to see you here

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/31/2013 3:25:00 AM

You both have expressed love so fondly and beautifully! I am most impressed with this tremendous write! Your words are intense and hopeful! What a wonderful poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/31/2013 2:25:00 PM

thank you Russell, glad you liked it ....Seren