Hope

Heart - beat increases Opened - to love Poetry - allowed in Enter - help lighten my soul

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/11/2013 10:12:00 PM

Nice acrostic, Seren. Thanks for sharing your hope. Always, Laura

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/24/2013 11:13:00 PM

Well done my friend!!!!! Loved the last line!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/25/2013 1:14:00 AM

Thank you ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/24/2013 12:04:00 PM

This is a glorious and intriguing write my friend! I really loved reading this illustrious poem here this afternoon! What a wonderful piece, quite the stupendous poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/2/2013 5:53:00 PM

Hi Russell, hope all is well with you ...Seren

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/24/2013 6:39:00 AM

Lovely simple and honest. Hope is the rhythm of our heartbeats.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2013 6:57:00 AM

Thx i am glad u liked it...Seren