Hope

A fear from deep within me rises up, filling my mind. Like white-hot steel piercing my heart, strangling my thoughts and choking out a dying hope that tries ever so valiantly to live within me. But still, that hope does live. Ever so faint, ever so small. Fighting desperately for a spot in my heart. Looking around me, all seems grim. But still that hope persists. Hanging on, holding tight, fighting for that little spark of life and bracing for a fight with fear. Never again will I look upon hope as a frivolous thing for frivolous people. Hope is and will always be the destroyer of fear. Hope is what every man's heart should desire. Hope...Is all I have.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/27/2011 7:45:00 AM
this is one of the best pieces i have read in a long time...nice3 diction..lovely poem,well put together......hope is all we need in this depraved generation....hope too is all i have...beautiful piece...keep the good work up
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Jason Callahan
Date: 11/27/2011 7:57:00 AM
Thank you for the comment, it really helps because I've never been sure if my writings were worth reading.
Date: 11/27/2011 7:18:00 AM
Very nicely said.. Hope and faith...Michael
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Jason Callahan
Date: 11/27/2011 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, only the second poem I've ever let anyone read. Give me inspiration to post more.
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