Hop-Scotch

Hop ahead, hop behind Hop sideways, perhaps rewind Matters only what you find in the melody of your mind

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Deb M

Date: 12/3/2023 1:17:00 PM

I love this poem BB ….it took me back to being little girl Deb playing hopscotch daily and loving it so much! Gave me that sad nostalgic feeling! Debx

Deb M
Date: 12/3/2023 3:26:00 PM

You make me laugh BB!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2023 1:30:00 PM

Ha, ha. When I was a little boy - not so long ago - I took the hops out of the scotch, put them in some beer, and then I had two drinks for the price of one. Yeah, sure I did. I am SUCH a liar. :) gw

Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 6:47:00 PM

It's just a game, you can be lame. It's just for fun. BB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2023 7:57:00 PM

Not a game we play for fame, anyway. ~ LeBron Jame(s)

David Fisher

Date: 12/2/2023 5:35:00 PM

Like your take on that classic; from structure to ramble. Makes sense to me.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2023 7:53:00 PM

Good. You're a barometer for me to judge things by, David. You know, kind of like a weathervane without the rooster on top. ~ Chanticleer

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/1/2023 3:03:00 PM

there's a simple profundity to your words, Gershon. Today I am rewinding, replaying memories and melodies in my mind. Nicely done. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2023 7:52:00 PM

Simple and profound. That's me, alright... Some might disagree with the second and third word... Understandable... :) gw