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Hoot's Toot

There once was a little Jack Russell who was as sweet as she was cute and went by the nicname of hoot. Now in the evening the family would gather to spend family time together. Everyone including Hoot was there. Me on the couch the kids on the floor and dad in his favorite chair. As we sat there a smell most foul quickly filled the air. It seems our sweet little hoot had let loose with a toot and now we are all fighting for air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/14/2012 1:43:00 AM
Very cute write.Yeah I can see your family here.
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/14/2012 6:49:00 PM
ah you are exploring what we talked about. Hope you enjoyed this almost limerick type poem. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/2/2012 4:45:00 PM
My bad I didn't check the requirements for a limerick before I listed this as one. It sounded like one so I just assumed that it was. I will change it's listing. Thanks for letting me know. May you have fair weather and sunny days. TLee
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:42:00 AM
Terry, great words, though a little odd for a limerick, like it though..David
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/2/2012 4:49:00 PM
My bad. I didn't check the requirements for a limerick before I listed this as one. It sounded like one so I just assumed that it was one. I will change it's listing straight away. Thanks for letting me know. May you have fair weather and sunny days. TLee
Date: 5/1/2012 8:19:00 PM
This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 8:53:00 PM
Thank you Shirley and thank you for your kindness to review. TLee

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